for To Duel With Fate10/16/2022 c16 jesskmemmy
So excited you came back to this story. I always love when authors pick it up again. Love the transition and can’t wait to hear what the details of the hokage mtg was!
So excited you came back to this story. I always love when authors pick it up again. Love the transition and can’t wait to hear what the details of the hokage mtg was!
10/16/2022 c16 Missmock
I've read through the comments and author, don't mind them. As a writer myself. I applaud your writing skills. You have a way with words. This is one of my favorite fanfics. Not because of the story itself but of how well it is written. The emotions are there. Despite it being a third-person omniscient you still manage to touch the heart of your readers (First clue, the haters wouldn't be so angry if they felt nothing)
Keep writing this fan fic. Some don't even get read but yours is being read and that says a lot. Weather it be a bad comment or good, it's being read.
You're a great writer. Keep that in mind.
I've read through the comments and author, don't mind them. As a writer myself. I applaud your writing skills. You have a way with words. This is one of my favorite fanfics. Not because of the story itself but of how well it is written. The emotions are there. Despite it being a third-person omniscient you still manage to touch the heart of your readers (First clue, the haters wouldn't be so angry if they felt nothing)
Keep writing this fan fic. Some don't even get read but yours is being read and that says a lot. Weather it be a bad comment or good, it's being read.
You're a great writer. Keep that in mind.
10/16/2022 c4 Key
It makes sense Fugaku reminds her of Itachi but it makes me a little uneasy ngl.
Omg I know I keep saying this but when Shisui drops to the floor to apologize it blew me away. He was so sure. Fugaku must’ve known just then how serious it really was. I love that you included this scene. It hits so hard.
Hehe Sakura getting hugged by Uchihas one by one.
Also really like how we catch a little of Shisui’s personality by not making him ashamed of his tears.
Enjoying the little glimpses of deja vu of that day.
You know what’s great? Every now and then I laugh so hard at some unexpected scene. You’d be in the midst of a really dramatic situation when something like THIS happens:
Shisui arched a brow at her.
"Well...yyyyyy—no. Not really. Kinda."
He stared.
"I don't know."
I wanted to quote more but yeah. It seriously makes me laugh out loud every time. I enjoy your sense of humor.
Shisui is too observant for his own good.
I also appreciate that you add realism to your story by not forgetting key people’s reactions to such events. The Tsunade scene was so needed and a believable consequence to what happened.
Okay Sakura with her foot-in-mouth syndrome. She should not have brought up Dan when she doesn’t even know how she feels about Itachi.
Omg! Fugaku entered right after her. Did he persuade her to promote Sakura to Anbu or am I just jumping to conclusions?
Sorry for not reviewing earlier. Am actually typing this painstakingly on my phone because I’m away from home.
I took a look at your review page to remind myself which chapter I was at and read that infuriating flame. You warn people of the subject matter and they still insist on being moronic. I’m sorry please ignore them and hope it doesn’t affect your determination to write. Hope you have a great weekend.
It makes sense Fugaku reminds her of Itachi but it makes me a little uneasy ngl.
Omg I know I keep saying this but when Shisui drops to the floor to apologize it blew me away. He was so sure. Fugaku must’ve known just then how serious it really was. I love that you included this scene. It hits so hard.
Hehe Sakura getting hugged by Uchihas one by one.
Also really like how we catch a little of Shisui’s personality by not making him ashamed of his tears.
Enjoying the little glimpses of deja vu of that day.
You know what’s great? Every now and then I laugh so hard at some unexpected scene. You’d be in the midst of a really dramatic situation when something like THIS happens:
Shisui arched a brow at her.
"Well...yyyyyy—no. Not really. Kinda."
He stared.
"I don't know."
I wanted to quote more but yeah. It seriously makes me laugh out loud every time. I enjoy your sense of humor.
Shisui is too observant for his own good.
I also appreciate that you add realism to your story by not forgetting key people’s reactions to such events. The Tsunade scene was so needed and a believable consequence to what happened.
Okay Sakura with her foot-in-mouth syndrome. She should not have brought up Dan when she doesn’t even know how she feels about Itachi.
Omg! Fugaku entered right after her. Did he persuade her to promote Sakura to Anbu or am I just jumping to conclusions?
Sorry for not reviewing earlier. Am actually typing this painstakingly on my phone because I’m away from home.
I took a look at your review page to remind myself which chapter I was at and read that infuriating flame. You warn people of the subject matter and they still insist on being moronic. I’m sorry please ignore them and hope it doesn’t affect your determination to write. Hope you have a great weekend.
10/16/2022 c1 fizzybones111
Sakura gets raped-becomes a slut-proceeds to be itachi's whore?
In the end she's gonna love him?...
Tf is wrong with this world? Like Ong what wrong with this world and the people in it? Are y'all Naruto fans this brainded? Horny losers? First off all, the pairing itself is a complete pile of shii-.
An adult and a 15yr old minor getting laid :O(JUST WOW)
You made the shadow hokage into EDP445...Bro your a little brat with a dirty mind. The best thing you do is:
1)Kill yourself
2)Ask your mom why I was born like this.
******
Y'all are a fuking disgrace to the Naruto fandom(Shipping pairs which never make sense). I'm already traumatized with the canon pairs and now you've made me go into PTSD with your crap...
Can't blame you, your parents didn't raise you in the right way..[I pity em for having an embarrassing child who has no life writing rape stories(which somehow turns into romance :O)].
Wish I could turn back time and stop myself from reading this(is it possible if so help me out!)...Gotta seek God after all this ranting
Go on bro..why don't you sneak-a-peak on your mom while she rides em father's meat? It'll help her gain heavenly pleasure! You sick mf.
[Those weird ass n*gga's who appreciate's your work are another set of low life creatures who has no parents].
Disappointed asf with y'all :'(
Sakura gets raped-becomes a slut-proceeds to be itachi's whore?
In the end she's gonna love him?...
Tf is wrong with this world? Like Ong what wrong with this world and the people in it? Are y'all Naruto fans this brainded? Horny losers? First off all, the pairing itself is a complete pile of shii-.
An adult and a 15yr old minor getting laid :O(JUST WOW)
You made the shadow hokage into EDP445...Bro your a little brat with a dirty mind. The best thing you do is:
1)Kill yourself
2)Ask your mom why I was born like this.
******
Y'all are a fuking disgrace to the Naruto fandom(Shipping pairs which never make sense). I'm already traumatized with the canon pairs and now you've made me go into PTSD with your crap...
Can't blame you, your parents didn't raise you in the right way..[I pity em for having an embarrassing child who has no life writing rape stories(which somehow turns into romance :O)].
Wish I could turn back time and stop myself from reading this(is it possible if so help me out!)...Gotta seek God after all this ranting
Go on bro..why don't you sneak-a-peak on your mom while she rides em father's meat? It'll help her gain heavenly pleasure! You sick mf.
[Those weird ass n*gga's who appreciate's your work are another set of low life creatures who has no parents].
Disappointed asf with y'all :'(
10/15/2022 c3 Key
My kink is seeing Sasuke reprimanded by his mother in front of Sakura.
Sasuke thanking her for staying with Itachi is making me giggle knowing what’s coming.
His mum is so awesome. Bash that brat, Mikoto. “Sasuke looked shocked for a second, before sheepishly glancing away, saying nothing.”
I LOVE that the nurse spared no detail so they can properly understand and appreciate what Sakura did to help Itachi. Impossible debt, indeed.
Poor Sakura losing it at Sasuke hugging her.
What a whiplash of emotions. I bet Sakura wishes she had burned that cursed yukata long ago.
“It was going in the trash.” Too little, too late!
My kink is seeing Sasuke reprimanded by his mother in front of Sakura.
Sasuke thanking her for staying with Itachi is making me giggle knowing what’s coming.
His mum is so awesome. Bash that brat, Mikoto. “Sasuke looked shocked for a second, before sheepishly glancing away, saying nothing.”
I LOVE that the nurse spared no detail so they can properly understand and appreciate what Sakura did to help Itachi. Impossible debt, indeed.
Poor Sakura losing it at Sasuke hugging her.
What a whiplash of emotions. I bet Sakura wishes she had burned that cursed yukata long ago.
“It was going in the trash.” Too little, too late!
10/14/2022 c2 Key
Legendary chapter. Sakura shines bright and also discovers she’s a badass.
Ah, the smoking gun, sorry, I mean the cream yukata. We need a picture of this yukata I think.
Sakura needing to be the best medic as to compete with Naruto and Sasuke is painful. You’re still an excellent shinobi Sakura it’s just that Kishimoto did you dirty.
It’s so realistic that she didn’t realize who it was at first and it took her a moment or two to catch up.
I’m always impressed by fanfic writers who not only know medical terminology but understand how to apply it in fic. I couldn’t write such a scene if my life depended on it.
Is this the moment she realises he means a lot more to her than she thought he did?
The unconscious scenes of petals and darkness are so poetic and I guess kind of romantic?
The scene with her insisting on injecting him with chakra in a very long time period with witnesses was difficult to read.
I wonder what the other medics thought of her. They had to have a couple of theories.
Legendary chapter. Sakura shines bright and also discovers she’s a badass.
Ah, the smoking gun, sorry, I mean the cream yukata. We need a picture of this yukata I think.
Sakura needing to be the best medic as to compete with Naruto and Sasuke is painful. You’re still an excellent shinobi Sakura it’s just that Kishimoto did you dirty.
It’s so realistic that she didn’t realize who it was at first and it took her a moment or two to catch up.
I’m always impressed by fanfic writers who not only know medical terminology but understand how to apply it in fic. I couldn’t write such a scene if my life depended on it.
Is this the moment she realises he means a lot more to her than she thought he did?
The unconscious scenes of petals and darkness are so poetic and I guess kind of romantic?
The scene with her insisting on injecting him with chakra in a very long time period with witnesses was difficult to read.
I wonder what the other medics thought of her. They had to have a couple of theories.
10/13/2022 c1 Key
I love how the ‘genre’ of this fic changes seems to have changed. All of the first fic was contained in one place with two people (mostly) but now it's a big change of setting and atmosphere even if not for long.
Also it’s really incredible how you managed to describe the scene. It really felt like it was out of a war. And you wrote it so dramatic (without it being melodramatic). I really felt like they were going to die.
Itachi needed humbling after THAT so I think it’s fitting that this is the first scene.
“the weight of Itachi might as well have been the weight of Konoha itself” always liked this line.
Shisui is a superhero. Right in the nick of time.
(If you're sick of my daily reviews say so and I'll stop. I just feel like I owe you and I want to deliver.)
I love how the ‘genre’ of this fic changes seems to have changed. All of the first fic was contained in one place with two people (mostly) but now it's a big change of setting and atmosphere even if not for long.
Also it’s really incredible how you managed to describe the scene. It really felt like it was out of a war. And you wrote it so dramatic (without it being melodramatic). I really felt like they were going to die.
Itachi needed humbling after THAT so I think it’s fitting that this is the first scene.
“the weight of Itachi might as well have been the weight of Konoha itself” always liked this line.
Shisui is a superhero. Right in the nick of time.
(If you're sick of my daily reviews say so and I'll stop. I just feel like I owe you and I want to deliver.)
10/12/2022 c15 ThatPageantGirl
Lol, well, Mikoto certainly knows her son, doesn't she? It would seem that Itachi isn't quite as artful as he thinks he is. And that wasn't a 'no' from Shisui :D Makes me wonder if this could actually be a thing...
Lol, well, Mikoto certainly knows her son, doesn't she? It would seem that Itachi isn't quite as artful as he thinks he is. And that wasn't a 'no' from Shisui :D Makes me wonder if this could actually be a thing...
10/11/2022 c15 Guest
Yay! Thank you for the post! I had to re-read the stories again. I forgot how good of a fic it is. Here’s to hoping you find bits of time for more! Thank you again!
Yay! Thank you for the post! I had to re-read the stories again. I forgot how good of a fic it is. Here’s to hoping you find bits of time for more! Thank you again!
10/10/2022 c15 
6Tragically Humorous
Well no, I never thought this story would get an update. I never thought I would still be reading FF years later either, but here we are!
So I went back and read the original story and then this sequel again to refresh myself. I loved this chapter. It was nice to see Sakura and Itachi happy together.
If you do find yourself writing again, I will very pleasantly surprised and here to read.
Thank you for the update!
6Tragically HumorousWell no, I never thought this story would get an update. I never thought I would still be reading FF years later either, but here we are!
So I went back and read the original story and then this sequel again to refresh myself. I loved this chapter. It was nice to see Sakura and Itachi happy together.
If you do find yourself writing again, I will very pleasantly surprised and here to read.
Thank you for the update!
10/10/2022 c15 kazuyaryo
I hope you are well.
Thankyou for update with this amazing charter I hope you can continue that fantastic story.
I hope you are well.
Thankyou for update with this amazing charter I hope you can continue that fantastic story.