for Role Reversal - Revised Version6/23/2014 c12 Guest
Please keep going! I read your first role reversal and loved every single word!
Please keep going! I read your first role reversal and loved every single word!
10/21/2013 c11 Guest
PLZ KEEP WRITING
PLZ KEEP WRITING
9/2/2013 c10 Leona2826
I generally don't review but I'm absolutely loving this different take on the first book. I like seeing a strong and independent Bella, she was too much of a pushover in the books and movies which really annoyed me and when people write her as a weak individual in the fics it makes for dull reading. So thank you for writing this story it's really enjoyable.
I generally don't review but I'm absolutely loving this different take on the first book. I like seeing a strong and independent Bella, she was too much of a pushover in the books and movies which really annoyed me and when people write her as a weak individual in the fics it makes for dull reading. So thank you for writing this story it's really enjoyable.
7/24/2013 c9 brankel1
I love it. I love that he & Bella talked. And Bella asked him what if the legends are true.
I love it. I love that he & Bella talked. And Bella asked him what if the legends are true.
7/24/2013 c9 
3Lyssa03
I absolutely love the story, but I didn't find this chapter to be the best. Not sure if maybe it's because it's Jakes pov or not, but I just find it a but awkwardly written? Still great story though.
3Lyssa03I absolutely love the story, but I didn't find this chapter to be the best. Not sure if maybe it's because it's Jakes pov or not, but I just find it a but awkwardly written? Still great story though.
7/16/2013 c8 Lyssa03
Another great chapter, from a great writer. Took me longer to start reading this chapter, just started reading a story with 400,000 words. Eeek. Worth the wait for me though.
Another great chapter, from a great writer. Took me longer to start reading this chapter, just started reading a story with 400,000 words. Eeek. Worth the wait for me though.