
7/14/2013 c7 brankel1
amazing job. I love that she went to school only to find out it's Sunday. I love that she & Charlie knows what each other are going to say.
amazing job. I love that she went to school only to find out it's Sunday. I love that she & Charlie knows what each other are going to say.
7/10/2013 c7 Guest
Love how u show different point of views keeps it really interesting love the whole storyline so far and it is so good to finally read one that isn't afraid of detail! Please don't stop!
Love how u show different point of views keeps it really interesting love the whole storyline so far and it is so good to finally read one that isn't afraid of detail! Please don't stop!
7/9/2013 c7 Guest
This is really good hope u post more!
This is really good hope u post more!
6/20/2013 c6 Lyssa03
Awww. They're so cute together! Glad you updated and I can't wait for the next chapter. You're doing great!
Awww. They're so cute together! Glad you updated and I can't wait for the next chapter. You're doing great!
6/12/2013 c4 Lyssa03
That sneaky Jake. He needs to get his butt moving before Edward and his sparkley ass butts in.
That sneaky Jake. He needs to get his butt moving before Edward and his sparkley ass butts in.
6/12/2013 c2 Lyssa03
Can I just say again that I really hate Edward? Awesome story. Was going to read the otter version when I noticed this one.
Can I just say again that I really hate Edward? Awesome story. Was going to read the otter version when I noticed this one.