for Twin Demons7/12/2018 c1 
9MySoberThoughts
Who finally got time to read your writing? This guy! I wanted to get a feel for what kind of style you use and this was a great intro to it. Haha I absolutely love that you were able to maintain the facade of a battle between him and the terrible two the whole time.
9MySoberThoughtsWho finally got time to read your writing? This guy! I wanted to get a feel for what kind of style you use and this was a great intro to it. Haha I absolutely love that you were able to maintain the facade of a battle between him and the terrible two the whole time.
2/22/2014 c1 trebeh
This was a cute little story that I found myself enjoying; good job! One thing that came to mind though was that it sort of seemed out of place to have westernized names for Naruto's kids; you might consider choosing Japanese names for them instead, but that's up to you. Keep up the good work
This was a cute little story that I found myself enjoying; good job! One thing that came to mind though was that it sort of seemed out of place to have westernized names for Naruto's kids; you might consider choosing Japanese names for them instead, but that's up to you. Keep up the good work