for A Demon in the Shadows8/9 c20 Guest
All you write is just porn because that's what this and everything else you write is , pedo incest gangbang porn with no plot
All you write is just porn because that's what this and everything else you write is , pedo incest gangbang porn with no plot
8/9 c1 Guest
This is shot and you are a pedophile
This is shot and you are a pedophile
7/9 c4 dr.frivolouslll
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo Why couldn't Ino be on the same team.
(I guess it would be too easy and the story would just speed up)
Good Chapter!
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo Why couldn't Ino be on the same team.
(I guess it would be too easy and the story would just speed up)
Good Chapter!
6/19 c7 Guest
menuts fag lol
menuts fag lol
4/14 c1 Guest
This chapter was amazing! Author-san really knows how to craft a story. The pacing was just right, with a good mix of action, dialogue, and reflection.
This chapter was amazing! Author-san really knows how to craft a story. The pacing was just right, with a good mix of action, dialogue, and reflection.
4/13 c48 Featured Reader
another great chapter. Good to have you back. I wonder what will happen to Kurenai. Will Naruto meat her in Tanzaku? And I'm eager to see Naruto and Kisame fighting.
another great chapter. Good to have you back. I wonder what will happen to Kurenai. Will Naruto meat her in Tanzaku? And I'm eager to see Naruto and Kisame fighting.
4/11 c48 
1Adinda Carmilla
I thought it would be great story but it turned to be trash. I'm sorry, but I can't stand with alpha character who act like beta.
1Adinda CarmillaI thought it would be great story but it turned to be trash. I'm sorry, but I can't stand with alpha character who act like beta.
4/10 c48 GoToHornyJail
Kurenai's fate isnt that bad? You made her a literal sex slave. You right in the head?
Kurenai's fate isnt that bad? You made her a literal sex slave. You right in the head?
3/30 c2 Chakakakakakaka
This ain't the worst grammar I've seen, but God damn is it still dogshit tier. Also, Naruto sure is articulate for a five year old. Have you ever met a five year old? They're pretty fucking stupid mate, for an orphan that everyone hates he sure is educated enough to know a word like compassion.
This ain't the worst grammar I've seen, but God damn is it still dogshit tier. Also, Naruto sure is articulate for a five year old. Have you ever met a five year old? They're pretty fucking stupid mate, for an orphan that everyone hates he sure is educated enough to know a word like compassion.