for A Demon in the Shadows7/8/2020 c4 PrimeEmperor
And i hope you make him learn sage mode and fuin jutsu (extract all beasts,, maybe only their souls)
And i hope you make him learn sage mode and fuin jutsu (extract all beasts,, maybe only their souls)
4/26/2020 c45 Guest
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3/3/2020 c17 silversnitch4765
Loved the chapter for the most part, having said that, massive eye roll on “Madara” witnessing it.
Loved the chapter for the most part, having said that, massive eye roll on “Madara” witnessing it.
3/2/2020 c45 ddsurvivor
Awesome Fan Fic. It has romance with a bit of a dark twist to the shinobi world. Really like it.
Awesome Fan Fic. It has romance with a bit of a dark twist to the shinobi world. Really like it.
2/21/2020 c3 
4Chaos Snow Kitsune
A bit of a shame Mikoto couldn't be left alive to later be one of his women, but other then that it's going pretty well so far
4Chaos Snow KitsuneA bit of a shame Mikoto couldn't be left alive to later be one of his women, but other then that it's going pretty well so far
2/21/2020 c1 Krystian Garlicki
add kushina to the harem. And this story goes 99.0 percent to my top 10 fanfiction.
add kushina to the harem. And this story goes 99.0 percent to my top 10 fanfiction.
2/18/2020 c3 TatsuyaShiva4
Thats so hard to read. First you killed the best Uchiha (Curse you). Second you turn both Minato and Naruto in the biggest fools and biggest pieces of Trash. So Bye.
Thats so hard to read. First you killed the best Uchiha (Curse you). Second you turn both Minato and Naruto in the biggest fools and biggest pieces of Trash. So Bye.
2/14/2020 c45 Primarx
was very surprised that u started updating again. had to reread all story. still feels like a great one. can't say I am interested in boku stories. your grammar is good in the last chapters despite the lack of beta. looking forward to the next chapters )
was very surprised that u started updating again. had to reread all story. still feels like a great one. can't say I am interested in boku stories. your grammar is good in the last chapters despite the lack of beta. looking forward to the next chapters )
2/12/2020 c45 Featured Reader
Good to see you back.
Don't pay attention to the guy below; he obviously didn't read the whole story.
Good to see you back.
Don't pay attention to the guy below; he obviously didn't read the whole story.
2/12/2020 c26 naruhina fan no.930
This story is filled with so much bad writing. The most obvious issue here is the romantic development between naruto and his girls, well there are none to put simply, this story is beyond sexist, the girls pretty much have no character development and are pretty much just fodder at this point especially with how many girls that just randomly fall in love with naruto for no discernable good reason. Not to mention how entitled naruto is to these girls, they literally almost don't have free will from the reader's point of view. He just walks up to them, pretty much sexually assult them and they fall in love with him in like 30 seconds. You would think to focus more on development for these relationship considering it takes up 75 percent of the story. Now aside from the horrible romance in this fic, so much shit just doesn't make sense. Like how naruto fakes forgiving his father instantly and his father thinks nothing of it even though he knows naruto is cold and cruel. As if naruto forgiving him just make sense, well it doesn't, how does such a scene even occur without grief or at least him getting somewhat mad is beyond me. Then there's the whole him being in a coma for months thing, dafaq was that, pretty much no logical explaination for that, its almost as if you wrote that in as a plot point just cuz you wanted it in. And also he somehow has an empire that pretty much monopolises the entire continent that was given no explaination whatsoever, just that it exist. The only thing that kept it sort of tolerable was naruto is still rather dark, but now that I've read the other reviews and found out he just forgive everyone, yeah fuck no this fic is trash.
This story is filled with so much bad writing. The most obvious issue here is the romantic development between naruto and his girls, well there are none to put simply, this story is beyond sexist, the girls pretty much have no character development and are pretty much just fodder at this point especially with how many girls that just randomly fall in love with naruto for no discernable good reason. Not to mention how entitled naruto is to these girls, they literally almost don't have free will from the reader's point of view. He just walks up to them, pretty much sexually assult them and they fall in love with him in like 30 seconds. You would think to focus more on development for these relationship considering it takes up 75 percent of the story. Now aside from the horrible romance in this fic, so much shit just doesn't make sense. Like how naruto fakes forgiving his father instantly and his father thinks nothing of it even though he knows naruto is cold and cruel. As if naruto forgiving him just make sense, well it doesn't, how does such a scene even occur without grief or at least him getting somewhat mad is beyond me. Then there's the whole him being in a coma for months thing, dafaq was that, pretty much no logical explaination for that, its almost as if you wrote that in as a plot point just cuz you wanted it in. And also he somehow has an empire that pretty much monopolises the entire continent that was given no explaination whatsoever, just that it exist. The only thing that kept it sort of tolerable was naruto is still rather dark, but now that I've read the other reviews and found out he just forgive everyone, yeah fuck no this fic is trash.
2/12/2020 c45 cloth slayer
I'll admit that if i came here during or right the fight i would have left but since this is the last chapter i stop at after bing reading I'll give this story my following
I'll admit that if i came here during or right the fight i would have left but since this is the last chapter i stop at after bing reading I'll give this story my following