for A Demon in the Shadows1/27/2018 c1 Mh3n013
Chapter 31: i get it that you dont want to make naruto a god, but seriously? Being a punching bag of lee when naruto can almost defeat the snake sanin? Then that means that Gai can defeate anyone, cuz obviously hes stronger than lee. You could have just not give naruto hes power in the beginning if you dont want him being al to powerful. I WASTED MY TIME, ANOTHER SHITTY POWER LEVEL SYSTEM.
Chapter 31: i get it that you dont want to make naruto a god, but seriously? Being a punching bag of lee when naruto can almost defeat the snake sanin? Then that means that Gai can defeate anyone, cuz obviously hes stronger than lee. You could have just not give naruto hes power in the beginning if you dont want him being al to powerful. I WASTED MY TIME, ANOTHER SHITTY POWER LEVEL SYSTEM.
10/9/2017 c41 Scandalf
I just finished reading your story and I have to say you failed miserably with this one. Just like %99 of the dark Naruto fanfics. I honestly couldn't even get past the 17th chapter(and I pushed myself really hard to get to that point) so I just skipped to the last 2 chapters that are out and I am sooo glad I did that because it saved me hours.
I am soo tired of all these dark Naruto fanfics starting with Naruto and Kyuubi making all kinds of plans to destroy or control Konoha and kill everyone they hate, just to give up all of those plans and for nothing to happen in the end. Somehow, Naruto who is filled with sooo much hate changes his way of thinking just because he ended up having sex with a bunch of women in Konoha. Even though all the women he is together with should be helping him with getting his revenge and destroying everything, because they already know of his plans and agreed to help him with them, in the end they just start trying to convince him to give up his plans of revenge to live a simple happy life(or try to convince him to not use an evil power to do what he wants to do).
For goodness sake, I started reading this novel because it was supposed to be a dark one, not a happy ending fairy tale. I hate the fact that you don't have the guts to continue on with dark setting simply because you are afraid of the bad reviews you are going to get from good ending fans when someone likeable dies in your fanfic. I wanted to see Naruto impaling his "father" and "brother" trough the heart in front of every single citizen of Konoha and then tell them what really happened. I wanted to see him start killing civillians left and right, in front of their families very eyes, just to make them feel the pain he felt all his life. I wanted to see him actually do something and kill those who are planning on controlling him, instead of letting them do whatever they want with him and playing right into their hands. But NO. He just forgets all of his hatred, anger, pain and decides to live his life like the village clown, with everyone watching his every single movement and acting like they never wronged him in his entire life.
meh whatever. this fic. doesn't do justice to its synopsis at all. "He gets to power to get revenge."
"Dark/naruto harem". Pfffftt. Revenge... Yeah right. Dark... Yeah right.
I just finished reading your story and I have to say you failed miserably with this one. Just like %99 of the dark Naruto fanfics. I honestly couldn't even get past the 17th chapter(and I pushed myself really hard to get to that point) so I just skipped to the last 2 chapters that are out and I am sooo glad I did that because it saved me hours.
I am soo tired of all these dark Naruto fanfics starting with Naruto and Kyuubi making all kinds of plans to destroy or control Konoha and kill everyone they hate, just to give up all of those plans and for nothing to happen in the end. Somehow, Naruto who is filled with sooo much hate changes his way of thinking just because he ended up having sex with a bunch of women in Konoha. Even though all the women he is together with should be helping him with getting his revenge and destroying everything, because they already know of his plans and agreed to help him with them, in the end they just start trying to convince him to give up his plans of revenge to live a simple happy life(or try to convince him to not use an evil power to do what he wants to do).
For goodness sake, I started reading this novel because it was supposed to be a dark one, not a happy ending fairy tale. I hate the fact that you don't have the guts to continue on with dark setting simply because you are afraid of the bad reviews you are going to get from good ending fans when someone likeable dies in your fanfic. I wanted to see Naruto impaling his "father" and "brother" trough the heart in front of every single citizen of Konoha and then tell them what really happened. I wanted to see him start killing civillians left and right, in front of their families very eyes, just to make them feel the pain he felt all his life. I wanted to see him actually do something and kill those who are planning on controlling him, instead of letting them do whatever they want with him and playing right into their hands. But NO. He just forgets all of his hatred, anger, pain and decides to live his life like the village clown, with everyone watching his every single movement and acting like they never wronged him in his entire life.
meh whatever. this fic. doesn't do justice to its synopsis at all. "He gets to power to get revenge."
"Dark/naruto harem". Pfffftt. Revenge... Yeah right. Dark... Yeah right.
24/16/2017 c25 Shu Ouma GC
Ok this story is getting a little out of hand and also getting ridiculous... I'm out.
Ok this story is getting a little out of hand and also getting ridiculous... I'm out.