for A Demon in the Shadows2/12/2014 c21 megaslayer321a
i feel ya man Naruto could have been so much more powerful even with out abusing the fuck out of things to make him OP(kage bushin). I mean he was practically born to be powerful the son of two very powerful ninja(minato and kushina) and he has the Kyuubi in him the at the time most powerful bijuu he literally should not have grown up weak.
i feel ya man Naruto could have been so much more powerful even with out abusing the fuck out of things to make him OP(kage bushin). I mean he was practically born to be powerful the son of two very powerful ninja(minato and kushina) and he has the Kyuubi in him the at the time most powerful bijuu he literally should not have grown up weak.
2/12/2014 c21 Guest
Nice and I somewhat agree with you on how the manga has come thus far, but hey that's what fanfiction was created for right?
Nice and I somewhat agree with you on how the manga has come thus far, but hey that's what fanfiction was created for right?
2/12/2014 c21 The One in the Mask
another great chapter from you and thank for release
you know if orochimaru know that naruto already possessed the apple he definitely will abort the invasion and grab naruto and get the hell out of there because naruto are more valuable compared to konoha
so you decide to let naruto buy karin from kusa and at the same time assassinate him i don't know what to say anymore you are truly eviiiiillllllllllllll
and by the way did naruto manage to grab minato blood from the battle since he need it to open the hiraishin seal
p/s the reason naruto is suck because it focus for younger audience not adult and kishimoto is uchiha fanboy so what do expect from him. and since i don't see the anime or movie and only read the manga i see that naruto never learn any jutsu even if he is powerhouse only kage bunshin and basic jutsu and rasengan since they don't require handsign but uchiha have plenty jutsu not to mention that kakashi even give him private tutor. honestly he spend two and half year training with jiraiya bur the only thing he accomplished is variation of rasengan and three tail control what the hell he doing with that prevent
another great chapter from you and thank for release
you know if orochimaru know that naruto already possessed the apple he definitely will abort the invasion and grab naruto and get the hell out of there because naruto are more valuable compared to konoha
so you decide to let naruto buy karin from kusa and at the same time assassinate him i don't know what to say anymore you are truly eviiiiillllllllllllll
and by the way did naruto manage to grab minato blood from the battle since he need it to open the hiraishin seal
p/s the reason naruto is suck because it focus for younger audience not adult and kishimoto is uchiha fanboy so what do expect from him. and since i don't see the anime or movie and only read the manga i see that naruto never learn any jutsu even if he is powerhouse only kage bunshin and basic jutsu and rasengan since they don't require handsign but uchiha have plenty jutsu not to mention that kakashi even give him private tutor. honestly he spend two and half year training with jiraiya bur the only thing he accomplished is variation of rasengan and three tail control what the hell he doing with that prevent
2/12/2014 c21 
3bcsclaymore
i hope ya do at least flashback of the movie between koyuki & naruto, think itt would show more development for the two. also ya have anything planned for kushina like temp. or pernament revival, learning about what minato did to naruto, and what happened to there clan?
3bcsclaymorei hope ya do at least flashback of the movie between koyuki & naruto, think itt would show more development for the two. also ya have anything planned for kushina like temp. or pernament revival, learning about what minato did to naruto, and what happened to there clan?
2/12/2014 c21 3Deathmvp
Great work on this chapter. I loved how you handled the the demon in in like this. One thing I was said about was nothing was brought up about him killing Kiba and I was thinking his mom would have said something at the end of this chapter either in the meeting or just 1 on 1 with the Hokaga.
3DeathmvpGreat work on this chapter. I loved how you handled the the demon in in like this. One thing I was said about was nothing was brought up about him killing Kiba and I was thinking his mom would have said something at the end of this chapter either in the meeting or just 1 on 1 with the Hokaga.
2/12/2014 c21 19dracohalo117
Love the fic so far, and I agree, Kishimoto is screwing EVERYTHING up...
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19dracohalo117Love the fic so far, and I agree, Kishimoto is screwing EVERYTHING up...
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2/12/2014 c21 19RandomWriter21
Great, Danzo is after his prize again; I foresee bad results happening. Great update.
19RandomWriter21Great, Danzo is after his prize again; I foresee bad results happening. Great update.
2/10/2014 c1 1Whyso Tizz
Dunno if this is good story or bad story, but you managed to push me away from the story by 1 paragraph. Honestly what is your reasson to bash Minato, hell he is one of the better characters of Naruto verse. Second ''Shinigami'' the Uzumaki forbidden seal doesn't choose his sacrifice, you offer him your own soul for executing the techinque. And lastly, if you watch Naruto and read manga you could also notice that there is no shinobi or civilian council, the shinobi are represented by Jounin Commander and Anbu ''general'' ? dunno if that's the correct rank, but what I want to say tha the system of hidden villages is by no way any kind of democratic regime, the only one who can move things just a little bit are Hokages advisors but in the end with greater occurence a kage must report to their Daimyo. That's pretty much I wanted to say about your story. Hope it helps.
1Whyso TizzDunno if this is good story or bad story, but you managed to push me away from the story by 1 paragraph. Honestly what is your reasson to bash Minato, hell he is one of the better characters of Naruto verse. Second ''Shinigami'' the Uzumaki forbidden seal doesn't choose his sacrifice, you offer him your own soul for executing the techinque. And lastly, if you watch Naruto and read manga you could also notice that there is no shinobi or civilian council, the shinobi are represented by Jounin Commander and Anbu ''general'' ? dunno if that's the correct rank, but what I want to say tha the system of hidden villages is by no way any kind of democratic regime, the only one who can move things just a little bit are Hokages advisors but in the end with greater occurence a kage must report to their Daimyo. That's pretty much I wanted to say about your story. Hope it helps.
2/7/2014 c15 21Flux Casey
So in your fic, you combined Dark Naruto with revenge-crazy Sasuke... I don't want to read this. Some people might but... I really don't. I don't want to read about a character who spits in the faces of those who genuinely try to make amends. Am I supposed to be rooting for this character? I get the feeling the answer is no. But then who do I want to see succeed? From the way you've set this up, you're planning for all of the people who are at the very least trying to do the right thing to get killed.
21Flux CaseySo in your fic, you combined Dark Naruto with revenge-crazy Sasuke... I don't want to read this. Some people might but... I really don't. I don't want to read about a character who spits in the faces of those who genuinely try to make amends. Am I supposed to be rooting for this character? I get the feeling the answer is no. But then who do I want to see succeed? From the way you've set this up, you're planning for all of the people who are at the very least trying to do the right thing to get killed.
2/6/2014 c20 Mandass
Read the story twice and it is written very good,except for some grammatical 't wait to read the next chapters :)
Read the story twice and it is written very good,except for some grammatical 't wait to read the next chapters :)
2/6/2014 c20 darthrevan
ouch poor dog..thanks for update
ouch poor dog..thanks for update
2/5/2014 c20 Guest
can't wait for the next chapter
can't wait for the next chapter