
2/4/2014 c19 The One in the Mask
the first thing i want to say is congrat to this fic. this fic is all around combination between lemon,story and fighting.
second thing is i just read a demon in the shadow spain version using google and quite suprise of what you do to kurenai do you really thing is necessary to put kurenai to brothel because i rather let her to become slave or something
third i don't understand what you planning to do with sakura, i see no reason to train her because naruto will defect from konoha and eventually will destroy the place so what the point to train her in cannon she decide to train with tsunade so she can save her precious sasuke and in this fic i found no reason to shift her crush from sasuke to naruto
i read the latest fic and you write that you will use narusaku pairing and i hope you just kidding around or google tranlate cannot probably translate the meaning and i hope the latter and what you planing with uzushio
thank for the fic and i waiting for the next chapter and good luck with checking your story and i hope you don't put this fic in long hiatus
the first thing i want to say is congrat to this fic. this fic is all around combination between lemon,story and fighting.
second thing is i just read a demon in the shadow spain version using google and quite suprise of what you do to kurenai do you really thing is necessary to put kurenai to brothel because i rather let her to become slave or something
third i don't understand what you planning to do with sakura, i see no reason to train her because naruto will defect from konoha and eventually will destroy the place so what the point to train her in cannon she decide to train with tsunade so she can save her precious sasuke and in this fic i found no reason to shift her crush from sasuke to naruto
i read the latest fic and you write that you will use narusaku pairing and i hope you just kidding around or google tranlate cannot probably translate the meaning and i hope the latter and what you planing with uzushio
thank for the fic and i waiting for the next chapter and good luck with checking your story and i hope you don't put this fic in long hiatus
1/30/2014 c19
7Floating Anemone
Oh man... I really hate cliffhangers! I can't wait for Naruto's match... well please update soon!

Oh man... I really hate cliffhangers! I can't wait for Naruto's match... well please update soon!
1/29/2014 c19
3Deathmvp
Great work on the fights in this chapter. I can not wait to see how you do with the rest of them.

Great work on the fights in this chapter. I can not wait to see how you do with the rest of them.
1/29/2014 c19 Samm91
It was a good chapter. Can't wait to see, how Naruto and Anko's conversation will turn out. I was a bit disappointed, that Temari lost, but that is because I really like her :P
Keep up the good work!
It was a good chapter. Can't wait to see, how Naruto and Anko's conversation will turn out. I was a bit disappointed, that Temari lost, but that is because I really like her :P
Keep up the good work!
1/29/2014 c19 JKing45
hey everyone needs some love just hope he still has some evil and wants to destroy konoha
hey everyone needs some love just hope he still has some evil and wants to destroy konoha
1/29/2014 c19 Takashi Komuro
Well your news is very depressing. I know how to read in Spanish, but I seriously don't don't want to do that.
Well your news is very depressing. I know how to read in Spanish, but I seriously don't don't want to do that.
1/29/2014 c19 ImDarthVaderModaFuka
Man! You can't stop translating this! I beg you! Continue translating it!
This fic fucking rocks! You can't do this!
Man! You can't stop translating this! I beg you! Continue translating it!
This fic fucking rocks! You can't do this!
1/27/2014 c15 RikudoNaruto1
im guessing naruto will edo tensei kushina then revive her fully with the rinne tensei no jutsu
im guessing naruto will edo tensei kushina then revive her fully with the rinne tensei no jutsu