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12ShadowLord1329
I would like to see Naruto get with Tsume The thought of Naruto rubbing the fact that he is banging kiba's mom is funny ex: Dobe this will be the hardest thing you have ever done," "Oh really thats exactly what your mom said last night."
12ShadowLord1329I would like to see Naruto get with Tsume The thought of Naruto rubbing the fact that he is banging kiba's mom is funny ex: Dobe this will be the hardest thing you have ever done," "Oh really thats exactly what your mom said last night."
12/13/2013 c15 MeanBeanDean
i thought naruto already had done it a bunch of time already, so why does he seem like it's his first time.
i thought naruto already had done it a bunch of time already, so why does he seem like it's his first time.
12/13/2013 c15 angel11xpr
nice story but I really hate the fact that you use d the cliche and stupid "only I can destroy konoha plot." I mean what the fuck, Its one thing to hate konoha and not warn them about the incoming invasion because they deserve it, but it is another thing entirely to have him help protect and sacrifice his men to defend it. It is both stupid and unrealistic to think that way.
Also, what part of allied villages do you people not get about the chunin exams. It is meant to be a rite of passage for those genins aspiring to get promoted, not that crap about involving other countries from the great five you and other authors do.
Sorry for the flames but I really hate it when everyone forgets the point of a story and just do what everyone does. At least you havent forgotten that this is a dark naruto story yet, I really hope you dont just turn him into a forgiving, peace loving pussy like other "dark naruto" authors do.
nice story but I really hate the fact that you use d the cliche and stupid "only I can destroy konoha plot." I mean what the fuck, Its one thing to hate konoha and not warn them about the incoming invasion because they deserve it, but it is another thing entirely to have him help protect and sacrifice his men to defend it. It is both stupid and unrealistic to think that way.
Also, what part of allied villages do you people not get about the chunin exams. It is meant to be a rite of passage for those genins aspiring to get promoted, not that crap about involving other countries from the great five you and other authors do.
Sorry for the flames but I really hate it when everyone forgets the point of a story and just do what everyone does. At least you havent forgotten that this is a dark naruto story yet, I really hope you dont just turn him into a forgiving, peace loving pussy like other "dark naruto" authors do.
12/13/2013 c15 UnsanMusho
Well I checked your harem list and I'm VERY happy to see Ino, Tenten and Haku being part of the harem, but I'm a bit confused about Kushina. I mean she's dead right? Though I can guess that you plan bringing her back but how? I'm going to have to re-read this fic to see if I missed anything, And what would Minato and Menma think about her return?
Well I checked your harem list and I'm VERY happy to see Ino, Tenten and Haku being part of the harem, but I'm a bit confused about Kushina. I mean she's dead right? Though I can guess that you plan bringing her back but how? I'm going to have to re-read this fic to see if I missed anything, And what would Minato and Menma think about her return?
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12/11/2013 c2 DialACow
You might want to 'dumb down' Naruto in this chapter. Correct me if I am wrong, but isn't Naruto supposed to be 5 years old in this chapter? I know 5 year olds can hold a conherent conversation, but most 5 year olds get excitable and still stumble on complicated words, for the most part. Just my two cents on the matter...
You might want to 'dumb down' Naruto in this chapter. Correct me if I am wrong, but isn't Naruto supposed to be 5 years old in this chapter? I know 5 year olds can hold a conherent conversation, but most 5 year olds get excitable and still stumble on complicated words, for the most part. Just my two cents on the matter...