
8/23/2013 c9 Guest
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8/22/2013 c5 BBWulf
Okay, so, from what I gather so far, english is not your irst language. And that's cool, but I would highly advise having someone more familiar with the language proofread your chapters(old and new) for you.
Okay, so, from what I gather so far, english is not your irst language. And that's cool, but I would highly advise having someone more familiar with the language proofread your chapters(old and new) for you.
8/22/2013 c9
1RINNESHARINGAN
nice chapter and wonderful story line...other than some grammatical errors not much mistakes

nice chapter and wonderful story line...other than some grammatical errors not much mistakes
8/22/2013 c4 BBWulf
There's only been a few errors here and there, but most seem like typos and not translation issues.
There's only been a few errors here and there, but most seem like typos and not translation issues.
8/19/2013 c8 sabery
What i like about this chapter was the fight with Zabuza but the most was that you add Tsunami at harem and have more with her in future . Yes for Tsunade . For rejuvenate i can say about Ying and Yang chakra or her creation reberith fill with kyubii chakra to make her younger or Naruto can use Human Path and put her soul in a younger body .
What i like about this chapter was the fight with Zabuza but the most was that you add Tsunami at harem and have more with her in future . Yes for Tsunade . For rejuvenate i can say about Ying and Yang chakra or her creation reberith fill with kyubii chakra to make her younger or Naruto can use Human Path and put her soul in a younger body .
8/18/2013 c8 Vongola II
Yes for Tsunade and Naruto could rejuvenate her by using the yang release of the rinnegan when she uses her creation rebirth technique
Yes for Tsunade and Naruto could rejuvenate her by using the yang release of the rinnegan when she uses her creation rebirth technique
8/16/2013 c4 ArthurB
its so naive and unrealistic... idk its feels like author is not out of high school yet.
its so naive and unrealistic... idk its feels like author is not out of high school yet.
8/12/2013 c8
3bcsclaymore
liking the story so far. can't wait till naruto rips into both minato and menma as son/brother. can't wait for the next chapter.

liking the story so far. can't wait till naruto rips into both minato and menma as son/brother. can't wait for the next chapter.
8/12/2013 c8 Shawn129
Cool chapter
I vote yes. A concentrated burst of Kurama's youki to Tsunade's seal could rejuvenate her
Cool chapter
I vote yes. A concentrated burst of Kurama's youki to Tsunade's seal could rejuvenate her