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8/23/2013 c9 Guest
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8/22/2013 c8 Trowa'sMemory
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8/22/2013 c4 Trowa'sMemory
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8/22/2013 c5 BBWulf
Okay, so, from what I gather so far, english is not your irst language. And that's cool, but I would highly advise having someone more familiar with the language proofread your chapters(old and new) for you.
8/22/2013 c2 Trowa'sMemory
Finally a root Naruto. Thank you.
8/22/2013 c9 1RINNESHARINGAN
nice chapter and wonderful story line...other than some grammatical errors not much mistakes
8/22/2013 c4 BBWulf
There's only been a few errors here and there, but most seem like typos and not translation issues.
8/21/2013 c8 JKing45
Tsunade:Yesssss
8/19/2013 c8 sabery
What i like about this chapter was the fight with Zabuza but the most was that you add Tsunami at harem and have more with her in future . Yes for Tsunade . For rejuvenate i can say about Ying and Yang chakra or her creation reberith fill with kyubii chakra to make her younger or Naruto can use Human Path and put her soul in a younger body .
8/18/2013 c8 Vongola II
Yes for Tsunade and Naruto could rejuvenate her by using the yang release of the rinnegan when she uses her creation rebirth technique
8/16/2013 c4 ArthurB
its so naive and unrealistic... idk its feels like author is not out of high school yet.
8/16/2013 c6 3God Of Cake
Haha Kushina will be in Naruto's herem it seems..Suck that Minato!
8/12/2013 c8 3bcsclaymore
liking the story so far. can't wait till naruto rips into both minato and menma as son/brother. can't wait for the next chapter.
8/12/2013 c8 LinMing2019
I vote yes to adding tsunade to the harem.
8/12/2013 c8 Shawn129
Cool chapter

I vote yes. A concentrated burst of Kurama's youki to Tsunade's seal could rejuvenate her
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