for A Demon in the Shadows
46/17/2013 c1 Sicloup
God this is like reading a comedy, the translation is fucking terrible. Why would you even post this in such a shitty state?
God this is like reading a comedy, the translation is fucking terrible. Why would you even post this in such a shitty state?
6/17/2013 c5 jonale.fm
put kushi-hime in the harem cause her soul is in naruto's seal an she is pissed and the yuri part ... i dont know
put kushi-hime in the harem cause her soul is in naruto's seal an she is pissed and the yuri part ... i dont know
6/17/2013 c5 GreyMan19
Your idead of a dark Naruto sounds quite right. Sometimes it seems like Naruto is more on the grey spectrum of things. He doesn't casually be violent, but he also doesn't take shit from anyone.
I would say YES to yuri IF Naruto is tossed in there to make a threesome.
Your idead of a dark Naruto sounds quite right. Sometimes it seems like Naruto is more on the grey spectrum of things. He doesn't casually be violent, but he also doesn't take shit from anyone.
I would say YES to yuri IF Naruto is tossed in there to make a threesome.
6/17/2013 c5 Guest
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6/17/2013 c5 Guest
this story would've been at least decent had you stopped referring naruto as a "demon". everyone and their granny keeps insulting him with that.
this story would've been at least decent had you stopped referring naruto as a "demon". everyone and their granny keeps insulting him with that.
6/11/2013 c4 DarkModeVA
If Kushina does get into the harem like a lot of people want that would be awesome! Talk about an ultimate slap to Minatos face Hahahahaha. Eh but don't take my word for it just keep writing the way you do cause the story is awesome.
If Kushina does get into the harem like a lot of people want that would be awesome! Talk about an ultimate slap to Minatos face Hahahahaha. Eh but don't take my word for it just keep writing the way you do cause the story is awesome.