
10/31/2015 c4 Guest
I swear my review wasn't a flame! (the last Guest review) I was just trying to help!
I swear my review wasn't a flame! (the last Guest review) I was just trying to help!
10/31/2015 c4 Guest
I really love this story so far the but I can't read this chapter... I say this because it's hard to focus on what is written - it's too smushed together. Can you please fix it?
I really love this story so far the but I can't read this chapter... I say this because it's hard to focus on what is written - it's too smushed together. Can you please fix it?
3/10/2015 c25 Alex
Stern is a dick. If your going to put Robert and Tasha have them torture Rose like the letter said
Put Dimitri's family in the story
update ASAP
Rose is going to be pissed
Stern is a dick. If your going to put Robert and Tasha have them torture Rose like the letter said
Put Dimitri's family in the story
update ASAP
Rose is going to be pissed
3/10/2015 c25
5RoseDimitriLoveJunky
Yep total jerk. You had to leave it there! And get Rose out of the hospital she's been in it most of the story! Please and thank you:)

Yep total jerk. You had to leave it there! And get Rose out of the hospital she's been in it most of the story! Please and thank you:)
10/29/2014 c24
5RoseDimitriLoveJunky
No,just NO! I'm sorry but if Christian received a deaththreat like that to both Lissa AND Rose never mind himself,he would not just say "oh I won't ask her about that just yet,she's got enough to deal with" and go and have dinner! no just NO!
But don't take this as criticism, I love the story can't and wait for the next update:)

No,just NO! I'm sorry but if Christian received a deaththreat like that to both Lissa AND Rose never mind himself,he would not just say "oh I won't ask her about that just yet,she's got enough to deal with" and go and have dinner! no just NO!
But don't take this as criticism, I love the story can't and wait for the next update:)
10/27/2014 c23 RoseDimitriLoveJunky
Aaaa I wanted the wake up seen:( but I looke the jealous side of Dimitri;)
Aaaa I wanted the wake up seen:( but I looke the jealous side of Dimitri;)
10/18/2014 c22 ellasawesome
Hi I don't have any ideas sorry but I really like your story I think you should write more especially because you finished chapter 22 with a cliff hanger!
Hi I don't have any ideas sorry but I really like your story I think you should write more especially because you finished chapter 22 with a cliff hanger!
10/17/2014 c22 mrs.belikov3369
Continue because I wanna know who's at the door. I'm not logged in my account sorry
Continue because I wanna know who's at the door. I'm not logged in my account sorry