for The Case of the Missing Marquess-Old version10/17/2018 c1 FlyingDragonsb
So, if I'm not wrong, your last update on these series was in 2014. I hope I'm not reviewing to later. I know it's been four years, but I'm gonna try anyway.
I REALLY love The Enola Holmes Mysteries and I also love the new BBC modern days Sherlock, Mycroft and Dr. Watson. When I discovered a fanfic that reunited both, I was ecstatic with joy. It's already rare to find a good Enola Holmes fanfiction, or a Sherlock fanfiction that do not wrong the characters. You nailed it. As I said before, I know it's been four years, and I'm not going to fool myself with hope. hahaha. I've read The Case of the Missing Marquess and The Case of the Left Handed Liar like a hundred times and it would make my year and life reeeeeally brighter if you suddenly felt like continuing your work on this amazing crossover. All the six Enola books with BBC modern days Sherlock and Mycroft, like you've done with the first two. Enola deserves Sherlock' and Mycroft's affection and respect and they should learn to give it to her and to earn hers. hahahaha. I know it's a bit to late, but seriously, it would be SO amazing. It's truly a dream! Probably you've got on with your life and don't even want to go back to this, which I perfectly understand, but it is said that " Hope it the last to die", so here am I, asking anyway. What could I lose? :D . Anyway, congratulations again with you AMAZING work. I do hope I'll be back soon reviewing new chapters of these marvelous series
So, if I'm not wrong, your last update on these series was in 2014. I hope I'm not reviewing to later. I know it's been four years, but I'm gonna try anyway.
I REALLY love The Enola Holmes Mysteries and I also love the new BBC modern days Sherlock, Mycroft and Dr. Watson. When I discovered a fanfic that reunited both, I was ecstatic with joy. It's already rare to find a good Enola Holmes fanfiction, or a Sherlock fanfiction that do not wrong the characters. You nailed it. As I said before, I know it's been four years, and I'm not going to fool myself with hope. hahaha. I've read The Case of the Missing Marquess and The Case of the Left Handed Liar like a hundred times and it would make my year and life reeeeeally brighter if you suddenly felt like continuing your work on this amazing crossover. All the six Enola books with BBC modern days Sherlock and Mycroft, like you've done with the first two. Enola deserves Sherlock' and Mycroft's affection and respect and they should learn to give it to her and to earn hers. hahahaha. I know it's a bit to late, but seriously, it would be SO amazing. It's truly a dream! Probably you've got on with your life and don't even want to go back to this, which I perfectly understand, but it is said that " Hope it the last to die", so here am I, asking anyway. What could I lose? :D . Anyway, congratulations again with you AMAZING work. I do hope I'll be back soon reviewing new chapters of these marvelous series
2/7/2018 c19 CaatNoir
Hellooo ~ ~ ~ I'm very glad to see that you rewrote the first few chapters. But although I'm following you, I didn't get any notifications saying you updated, I wonder why? I only realized that you rewrote it when I decided to reread you fanfics again (For like the bazillionth time . . . jk, jk, only like the twelfth or thirteenth time) Anyways, thought I should say this from the start: I really like the way you rewrote the first few chapters and the characters. I appreciate how you made Sherlock colder and blunter, I've always thought that Nancy Springer's Sherlock was a bit too emotional. From my view, Mycroft doesn't seem to have many changes, but I loved the way you rewrote Mr. and Mrs. Lane. Yes, they are servants, but regardless, they've been with Enola since her birth (Or her childhood, can't remember) and they should have a closer relationship. (Well in my opinion at least). As I mentioned earlier, I do like the new Sherlock 2.0 model, but I wonder how you plan on Enola and Sherlock's relationship to progress? In the book, Enola does, directly and indirectly, state that she wishes for Sherlock's respect (Can't remember if it was respect or affections). But Sherlock 2.0 is colder, as I have stated, so will their relationship move forward in the same way as in the books, or do you have something else hidden up your sleeve? Oh and sidenote: I really hope that, if you are going to write more E.H fanfics, based on the rest of the books, I hope you'll keep the "ha-ha" scene with Enola and Sherlock, it's one of my favorite interactions of those two. Come to think of it, my favorite parts of the series are all where the Holmes siblings interact. My favorite interaction with Mycroft is the wedding veil incident, nearly laughed myself to death with that one. Anyways, back to the topic!
So what I'm saying is, I had a lot of fun reading you rewritten, and newly titled "The Case of the Missing Man". I look forward to continuing " The Case Of The Left-handed Liar". (Please do update . . . I'm begging you). Well that's all for now, see you (hopefully) soon!
Ciao ~ ~ ~
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Hellooo ~ ~ ~ I'm very glad to see that you rewrote the first few chapters. But although I'm following you, I didn't get any notifications saying you updated, I wonder why? I only realized that you rewrote it when I decided to reread you fanfics again (For like the bazillionth time . . . jk, jk, only like the twelfth or thirteenth time) Anyways, thought I should say this from the start: I really like the way you rewrote the first few chapters and the characters. I appreciate how you made Sherlock colder and blunter, I've always thought that Nancy Springer's Sherlock was a bit too emotional. From my view, Mycroft doesn't seem to have many changes, but I loved the way you rewrote Mr. and Mrs. Lane. Yes, they are servants, but regardless, they've been with Enola since her birth (Or her childhood, can't remember) and they should have a closer relationship. (Well in my opinion at least). As I mentioned earlier, I do like the new Sherlock 2.0 model, but I wonder how you plan on Enola and Sherlock's relationship to progress? In the book, Enola does, directly and indirectly, state that she wishes for Sherlock's respect (Can't remember if it was respect or affections). But Sherlock 2.0 is colder, as I have stated, so will their relationship move forward in the same way as in the books, or do you have something else hidden up your sleeve? Oh and sidenote: I really hope that, if you are going to write more E.H fanfics, based on the rest of the books, I hope you'll keep the "ha-ha" scene with Enola and Sherlock, it's one of my favorite interactions of those two. Come to think of it, my favorite parts of the series are all where the Holmes siblings interact. My favorite interaction with Mycroft is the wedding veil incident, nearly laughed myself to death with that one. Anyways, back to the topic!
So what I'm saying is, I had a lot of fun reading you rewritten, and newly titled "The Case of the Missing Man". I look forward to continuing " The Case Of The Left-handed Liar". (Please do update . . . I'm begging you). Well that's all for now, see you (hopefully) soon!
Ciao ~ ~ ~
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12/30/2014 c17 Frost
Your story was amazing! I loved reading it. You're really an amazing writer! The knowledge that you wrote/are writing more made me giddy with joy. I'm going to read them right now!
Your story was amazing! I loved reading it. You're really an amazing writer! The knowledge that you wrote/are writing more made me giddy with joy. I'm going to read them right now!
12/10/2014 c17 Black Night
Welcome back! I completly understand about real life (its the reason why I have never written my own fanfic. I probably would never finish it!)
Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next story.
O! You're welcome by the way for the story. I'm glad you enjoy it. Do you like Harry Potter crossovers? I found a really good Harry Potter/ Sherlock crossover called "Potterlock Down" by KartheyM. Short summary: Voldemart hires Moriarty to smear Harry's good name, so Harry turns to Sherlock and John for help.
My favorite line: "Sherlock very much wanted to punch this man." (Guess who?)
Best Wishes,
Black Night.
Welcome back! I completly understand about real life (its the reason why I have never written my own fanfic. I probably would never finish it!)
Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next story.
O! You're welcome by the way for the story. I'm glad you enjoy it. Do you like Harry Potter crossovers? I found a really good Harry Potter/ Sherlock crossover called "Potterlock Down" by KartheyM. Short summary: Voldemart hires Moriarty to smear Harry's good name, so Harry turns to Sherlock and John for help.
My favorite line: "Sherlock very much wanted to punch this man." (Guess who?)
Best Wishes,
Black Night.
12/10/2014 c17 
7RedtailHawk19
Greay story glad you updated and going to write a sequel. I love the books, I can't wait to see your take on the books in a more modern setting. Enola is my favorite. Can't wait to read more. Good luck.
7RedtailHawk19Greay story glad you updated and going to write a sequel. I love the books, I can't wait to see your take on the books in a more modern setting. Enola is my favorite. Can't wait to read more. Good luck.
12/10/2014 c17 SnowCatt
I've never read the original story, so this is like a whole new adventure! :P
I've never read the original story, so this is like a whole new adventure! :P
12/10/2014 c17 20TiffanyRance
I'm so glad you updated, but I can't believe it's only been 7 months. I was reading a bunch other stories so I guess that's why time flew by for me. The chapter was good, but I've got to reread the story because i was a little lost.
20TiffanyRanceI'm so glad you updated, but I can't believe it's only been 7 months. I was reading a bunch other stories so I guess that's why time flew by for me. The chapter was good, but I've got to reread the story because i was a little lost.
11/11/2014 c16 ThatOneGirlYouForgot
Lemme just start things of: 1, I love the title.
2, I was reading Chapter the Fifteenth and wanted more Sherlock. You answered me in a way I can't repay you.
3, *SCREAMING*
4, Please just keep doing what you do, I will be checking on this too regularly. Good luck in school and stuff, because I absolutely love this series and need it to happen. I love you too. *forehead* Mwwuah.
5, I apologize for my me-ness.
Lemme just start things of: 1, I love the title.
2, I was reading Chapter the Fifteenth and wanted more Sherlock. You answered me in a way I can't repay you.
3, *SCREAMING*
4, Please just keep doing what you do, I will be checking on this too regularly. Good luck in school and stuff, because I absolutely love this series and need it to happen. I love you too. *forehead* Mwwuah.
5, I apologize for my me-ness.
10/27/2014 c16 Guest
Please, Please, Please make at least a couple scenes from the later books where Sherlock doesn't recognize Enola! Those are my favorite parts! Can you at least add the scene from the Case of the Bazzere Bouquets (sorry about spelling) in Dr. Watson's house when you get to that?
Please, Please, Please make at least a couple scenes from the later books where Sherlock doesn't recognize Enola! Those are my favorite parts! Can you at least add the scene from the Case of the Bazzere Bouquets (sorry about spelling) in Dr. Watson's house when you get to that?
6/29/2014 c16 Yoyi
Please update! I LOVE THIS STORY!
Please update! I LOVE THIS STORY!
5/25/2014 c16 Guest
Love it
Love it
5/25/2014 c16 Ellie
Aaaaaaah !
Your story is just too good to be true ! I loved Enola and I was looking for a Sherlock/Enola crossover for a long time.
I like that you start to change the plot now and that you modernised the story !
Do you plan on doing the next books of Enola ?
HURRY UP FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER I WANT TO KNOW !
Aaaaaaah !
Your story is just too good to be true ! I loved Enola and I was looking for a Sherlock/Enola crossover for a long time.
I like that you start to change the plot now and that you modernised the story !
Do you plan on doing the next books of Enola ?
HURRY UP FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER I WANT TO KNOW !