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11/27/2015 c2 Guest
This is good please update thank you
9/16/2015 c2 Guest
Continue on please
2/24/2015 c2 18Ro Noble
This was a great chapter! Been a long while since I've actually been on MBC. I didn't expect to see you finished this actually, nor did I expect to Maria in there, that got me.
5/30/2013 c1 12Dixxy
(bEtTeR lAtE tHaN nEvEr... ;)

Hey Em...Ely ! ;)
(see, i remembered abt yr firstname ? ...)

Sorry for the terrible delay in reviewing yr first fiction, but i absolutely wanted to finish reading another story. Ya forgive me ? :P

Now...

Pretty funny story ! I liked it and almost guffawed when Malinda thought : "God ! Just let me go to school !" That was way fun !

I liked how Danny kept calling for Malinda, each time she was about to set out.

And the stuff abt pedophiles & rapists... When i became friend wz Destiny (Masterminor), and told of me to her
schoolmates, they were all like "be careful,
he may be a pedophile or a rapist !" That
had to make me laugh, and because that
line in yr text mentions the same, it sure
enough makes me smile once again.

It sounds like a nice start. Hope you'll
have time to update it soon... Please
try to, at least, okay ? ;)

Best of inspiration for next chappy ! 8)

Take care !

***Léo-
5/25/2013 c1 1Emmyrulz4ever
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