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for Jibbs Parent trap with a twist

6/30/2021 c1 valerienav7
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2/12/2014 c1 35GeneaLady
A summary with no summary and a poorly written story... hm.
8/12/2013 c2 8Loverofallthingsmusic
Not bad. The first chapter could use a little work. It's really hard to read when it's completely in bold. Also, the way a new paragraph starts in the middle of the sentence makes the story hard to read. Oh, and add some line breaks, please. You're doing a good job, only some things need a little tweaking. :)
5/24/2013 c1 Guest
Get a beta. And why did you not use Leroy Jethro Gibbs and Jenny Shepard instead created new names. If you want to write original stories, go to

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