
5/16/2024 c12 Two.Headed.Mother
Hi, i was wondering if you plan on completing this. (I absolutely love it and my hart is crushed that it ended so abruptly)
Hi, i was wondering if you plan on completing this. (I absolutely love it and my hart is crushed that it ended so abruptly)
1/2/2024 c11 subbahamilton
So enjoyed reading this. Hermione’s uncertainty. Tom’s manipulations. Draco just being a a terrified front man.
Not sure it uts finished but thanku for posting.
Best wishes for 2024
So enjoyed reading this. Hermione’s uncertainty. Tom’s manipulations. Draco just being a a terrified front man.
Not sure it uts finished but thanku for posting.
Best wishes for 2024
6/29/2023 c1 Guest
I honestly wanted to like this story, but this is just bad. It's akin to sniffing a moldy egg casserole from the back of my fridge: a stupid waste of time for something rotten that belongs in the trash.
Now, I hope I have your attention and that you can improve your writing, but that's not why I'm here. I'm sending this message on behalf of my friend, Tanya, who lives in Florida and is an assistant site administrator.
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Review her stories. You don't have to read them, just give them good reviews. They don’t have to be long, just some quick praise will suffice. She’s trying to win a contest, and for that she needs a large amount of good reviews.
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I honestly wanted to like this story, but this is just bad. It's akin to sniffing a moldy egg casserole from the back of my fridge: a stupid waste of time for something rotten that belongs in the trash.
Now, I hope I have your attention and that you can improve your writing, but that's not why I'm here. I'm sending this message on behalf of my friend, Tanya, who lives in Florida and is an assistant site administrator.
Here is her profile:
www dot fanfiction dot net/u/2873027/
Review her stories. You don't have to read them, just give them good reviews. They don’t have to be long, just some quick praise will suffice. She’s trying to win a contest, and for that she needs a large amount of good reviews.
If you fail to comply by not responding or worse yet, attempt to leave a negative review, I will report your account to both The Critics United as well as the other site administrators for deletion. Do not think of blocking or reporting us. I will find out and there will be consequences if you do something stupid to her.
If you troll my friend, be warned we will troll you, your fics and all of your followers. We will also place your shit fic in our other friend's community, Shit Fics That Deserve a Good Flame, so that everyone here will make fun of you. Since we don't want it to come to that, just write a short, good review for her stories and we'll leave you alone.
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5/5/2023 c12 Guest
Please please continue this Story. Party II of the original Story is not satisfing at all!
Please please continue this Story. Party II of the original Story is not satisfing at all!
4/5/2023 c12 Guest
Excited for the new chapter. Thank you for the read!
Excited for the new chapter. Thank you for the read!
3/30/2023 c1
3JD SPARKS
Ahh, I am so glad you found your old laptop and the rest of the story. Thank you so much for posting it all! will start it as soon as I can finish my current fic/book!

Ahh, I am so glad you found your old laptop and the rest of the story. Thank you so much for posting it all! will start it as soon as I can finish my current fic/book!
3/30/2023 c12 whorefortyler
IM GONNA CRY RN. WHEN I SAW THE NOTIFICATION MY HEART GENUINELY STOPPED. THANK YOU <333333
IM GONNA CRY RN. WHEN I SAW THE NOTIFICATION MY HEART GENUINELY STOPPED. THANK YOU <333333
9/13/2022 c11 Guest
XD Creo que ya llegaste al número de reseñas, tendría que esperar venganza en el siguiente cap¿
XD Creo que ya llegaste al número de reseñas, tendría que esperar venganza en el siguiente cap¿
11/22/2021 c11 Malsano-Obsecion
I implore this to continue, don't be mean and come back please. I have a question: Why did the Matrona want to separate her from Tom? Come back soon!
I implore this to continue, don't be mean and come back please. I have a question: Why did the Matrona want to separate her from Tom? Come back soon!
11/13/2021 c11 theWererabbit
I love how you adapted Voldemort and the Death Eaters to fit in with the modern world. Amazing characterisation! I also appreciate how you made Tom Riddle as unforgivable as he is in the books, it doesn't feel like a tomione fanfic unless there's good amount of darkness weaved into the story. Can't wait to see how the story progresses! <3
I love how you adapted Voldemort and the Death Eaters to fit in with the modern world. Amazing characterisation! I also appreciate how you made Tom Riddle as unforgivable as he is in the books, it doesn't feel like a tomione fanfic unless there's good amount of darkness weaved into the story. Can't wait to see how the story progresses! <3
7/15/2021 c11 Guest
Gess can't believe i do waiting still this update :( please comeback ! Hope u always be healthy
Gess can't believe i do waiting still this update :( please comeback ! Hope u always be healthy