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12/12/2015 c1 Guest
This fanfic sucks. Even though I am a Graylu fan it will never happen.
1/5/2015 c1 Drakengel20
oh mann das wahr ja was und dann das mit lucy und dann das mit lucy gedanke und dann das gray sie beobachtet und dann was natsu gemacht hat und dann das mit hray seine liebe gestanden hat vor lucy und lucy gleich fühlt hast du super geamcht mach wider so schöne geschichte

oh man true what and then with lucy and then with lucy thought and then Gray she observes and then has made what natsu and has stood then with hray his dear one before lucy and lucy immediately feels you have really geamcht make against so nice history

sorry if I have properly translated it nich there I German am
2/5/2014 c1 Guest
WTF! Wright a chapter on how Natsu gets jealous and gray then proceeds to beat the crap out of him! Please!
6/28/2013 c1 ShadowHunter0934
Lol funny and such a cute confession
5/25/2013 c1 Guest
so cute!
5/26/2013 c1 nommykinz
Natsu is never that straightforward so this...nvm
5/26/2013 c1 4mischeif maker
lol how cute
5/26/2013 c1 ShtJustGotReal
I don't actually get it. You might find me annoying but I've gotten quite tired with the "team-natsu-will-kick-lucy-and-will-be-replaced-by -lissana"

Find me irritating but I hope you'll take this as a constructive criticism.

I mean, seriously? How the hell did she fell inlove with Gray? You said she's inlove with Natsu and Gray just stood up for her! Idk... what to say. You could've atleast let it be longer and post more chapters at how Lucy's feeling we're progressing. RIGHT?
5/26/2013 c1 1Redbear108
Omg at the end you should of put "and somewhere at the back of the guild there was juvia glaring daggers al Lucy" don't get me wrong I love graylu even more than nalu and sticy but I can just imagine it

Btw love this!
5/26/2013 c1 27FriendsForevaa
Sorry if you find me annoying but I really think that this fanfic needs a bit improvement.

First of all too long paragraphs especially the first one,you don't know how I read it. It is difficult so please break them into smaller ones:)

2nd,How did she fall in love with him just because he confessed to her? I mean it is Lucy we are talking about. She wouldn't fall in love all of a sudden with him,will she? It would be more natural if she takes some time to re-consider her feelings.

3rd,Natsu would never ever abandon her. He treasures each and every person he meets(Even though I don't like him actually). I am not saying that I am a NaLu fan. I am actually a pure,proud,full-fledged GrayLu but still I don't like it when people make him no so in character.

Sorry,please take it as criticism and I can assure you that I will add it in my favorites if your improve these things:D
5/25/2013 c1 27CelestialLoverxxx
oh please do another chapter, this was so good!
5/25/2013 c1 4Ayame-knight
Question:
how did the guild feel?
And
if you could you should make this in other pov too

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