
7/25/2013 c1
20nyc2dragon
Nice story, I love Thomas and Relena's relationship. And the drama of the Norstein family. If you take suggestions on what could be expanded from this, Thomas start to open up and be more social with this friends, Relena becoming friends with Kristy and Keenan, Kristy especially. And go into Relena lack of a mother life, if you remember her mother died giving birth to her (though the dub tip toes from mentioning that)
Keep up the good work.

Nice story, I love Thomas and Relena's relationship. And the drama of the Norstein family. If you take suggestions on what could be expanded from this, Thomas start to open up and be more social with this friends, Relena becoming friends with Kristy and Keenan, Kristy especially. And go into Relena lack of a mother life, if you remember her mother died giving birth to her (though the dub tip toes from mentioning that)
Keep up the good work.
5/29/2013 c1
8Gennai's Acolyte
This was fairly nice as a little reflection on a character. I'm usually one for action and a plot, but since Thomas is one of only two main characters in Data Squad that I actually like, this was very nice. Just watch the grammar mistakes!

This was fairly nice as a little reflection on a character. I'm usually one for action and a plot, but since Thomas is one of only two main characters in Data Squad that I actually like, this was very nice. Just watch the grammar mistakes!