for Bad dream5/28/2013 c1 
2SpaceEngineerPeanut
That would be horrifying! Thank goodness she has Daniel.
Well done, thank you!
2SpaceEngineerPeanutThat would be horrifying! Thank goodness she has Daniel.
Well done, thank you!
5/27/2013 c1 63djenie
What a nightmare! Pretty scary for Vala! Good thing Daniel was there for her. Nicely done.
63djenieWhat a nightmare! Pretty scary for Vala! Good thing Daniel was there for her. Nicely done.
5/27/2013 c1 1SilverSnowdrop
scary! v glad it was just a dream.
also, the creepy kids-chanting tells me you may have been watching too much Supernatural :-D
1SilverSnowdropscary! v glad it was just a dream.
also, the creepy kids-chanting tells me you may have been watching too much Supernatural :-D
5/27/2013 c1 27fantasdancer
Nice story. It's only to be expected that Vala would come back with some issues after being stuck in Ori territory for so long not to mention being forced to bare Adria and watch all the bad things she did. Well done
27fantasdancerNice story. It's only to be expected that Vala would come back with some issues after being stuck in Ori territory for so long not to mention being forced to bare Adria and watch all the bad things she did. Well done
5/27/2013 c1 27SaidbhinLuch
Wow nicely done!
Interesting insight into Vala, and really creepy... Is it weird that I enjoyed it?
Never the less, excellent piece!
27SaidbhinLuchWow nicely done!
Interesting insight into Vala, and really creepy... Is it weird that I enjoyed it?
Never the less, excellent piece!
5/27/2013 c1 7Oldlibrn
Scary and cute. Maybe you should write a story where the situation is a nightmare but a living nightmare from which she and Daniel have to escape. Just an idle thought.
7OldlibrnScary and cute. Maybe you should write a story where the situation is a nightmare but a living nightmare from which she and Daniel have to escape. Just an idle thought.
5/27/2013 c1 Guest
Poor Vala! I could see her having nightmares! The Ori were creepy!
Poor Vala! I could see her having nightmares! The Ori were creepy!