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11/13/2020 c2 coolkid123
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3/19/2019 c2 5PinkiePieParty122894
So cute :)
3/29/2016 c2 animelvr16
I can't wait to see what happens next, so please post another chapter soon!
5/11/2015 c2 2ankwhat
Really cute and good story. Please finish it.
10/24/2014 c2 1SuperNinjaGirl97
Why would you stop, this is so cute! Please continue soon :D
8/3/2013 c2 7RuMHFY
So sorry for lack of reviews, I like this story. Keep up good work.
7/26/2013 c2 10sugardash
Well I'm interested.
6/28/2013 c2 AngelFang135
Adorable! love this story so much
6/9/2013 c2 11Gaaras-Gothic-Ninja-Sappy-Sue
I actually really like this! It's an iteresting plot that hasn't really been done before what with the dogs and whatnot - my only problem is that the conversations seem much too formal! I just don't think people actually talk like that - even in really formal sitiations. Like you'll almost always say "Hey, it's nice seeing you." Never, "Hello, it is nice to see you." See? It sounds kind of mechanical! I think dialogue can be a real strong point in a story so to add to your already amazing plot, all you have to do is patch up the dialogue and make it more believable I think! I'll await your next update! :)
6/1/2013 c2 BcozI'mNaughty
I laugh at 'lacking on chest department'. XD
Yeah, i love this! What bothering me is just, isn't it all the girls swoon over Sasuke, not just Sakura? where are they? o_O
6/1/2013 c2 Hitomi uchiha24
great chapter you go sasuke get your man yeah update soon okay
5/31/2013 c2 5Echodust20299
Really good chapter and well written. You did switch from first tothird p.o.v (point of view) randomly, and switched back after a paragraph or two...pet peeve of mine.

I like how this is from Sasuke's pov and I like how we most likely will not be in Naruto's head...unless you put in a chapter like that.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)
5/30/2013 c1 AngelFang135
hahaha take that sakura i like this story so far
5/29/2013 c1 HTEB1992
i really like what i see so far i hope you make more soon
5/29/2013 c1 Echodust20299
Nice job so far. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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