for When the Beat Stops3/13/2017 c8 NaluDragneel
Plz more chapters
Plz more chapters
7/16/2016 c8 Demonhuntress21
More please.
More please.
4/9/2016 c8 lillyRdalton
OMG! This is awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
OMG! This is awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
3/3/2016 c8 WeirdChick13
UPDATE PLZ! this fic is so interesting and I really like the music that u add...fucking bastard Spirit !please write more!
UPDATE PLZ! this fic is so interesting and I really like the music that u add...fucking bastard Spirit !please write more!
3/2/2016 c8 KAYLA
Beats the shit outta spirit that's wat u get as he cowers
Beats the shit outta spirit that's wat u get as he cowers
3/2/2016 c7 KAYLA
Weird how makas friends just randomly invite themselves to makas place for party's and such
Weird how makas friends just randomly invite themselves to makas place for party's and such
3/2/2016 c3 KAYLA
So souls a get what I want kinda guy
So souls a get what I want kinda guy
3/2/2016 c1 KAYLA
OMG maka and I have something in common I adore the color red too screams oh whoops got to excited there hehe it's just that maka and I are so different in personalitys I mean I have green eyes and dirty blond hair like her but she's so confident and is a make up lover or a shopaholic I'm just a blond tomboy who hates math and certain excerzises surprise surprise
OMG maka and I have something in common I adore the color red too screams oh whoops got to excited there hehe it's just that maka and I are so different in personalitys I mean I have green eyes and dirty blond hair like her but she's so confident and is a make up lover or a shopaholic I'm just a blond tomboy who hates math and certain excerzises surprise surprise
2/3/2016 c8 animedancer14
Wow! This story is amazing. I finally found time to read it and I cannot wait to read more from you. I love how everyone makes Spirit the bad guy. In almost every story he either dies or is a abusive asshole. Love the story.
Wow! This story is amazing. I finally found time to read it and I cannot wait to read more from you. I love how everyone makes Spirit the bad guy. In almost every story he either dies or is a abusive asshole. Love the story.
1/6/2016 c8 Awesomeness 1234
Omg I absolutely love this story! I love the dip it low song especially and the fucking perfect! And the I write sins not tragedies ! U are awesome! Keep up the great work and FUCK SPIRIT HE IS AN ASSHOLE! Also can u do music by like Evanescence or something like that? Just something awesome plz thx and keep up the OUTSTANDING WORK!
Omg I absolutely love this story! I love the dip it low song especially and the fucking perfect! And the I write sins not tragedies ! U are awesome! Keep up the great work and FUCK SPIRIT HE IS AN ASSHOLE! Also can u do music by like Evanescence or something like that? Just something awesome plz thx and keep up the OUTSTANDING WORK!
1/4/2016 c8 AnimeFlower
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLZ WRITE MORE AND WTF THAT DAMN SPIRIT I HAVE ALWAYS HATED THAT GUY! Plz write more !
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLZ WRITE MORE AND WTF THAT DAMN SPIRIT I HAVE ALWAYS HATED THAT GUY! Plz write more !
1/4/2016 c7 AnimeFlower
Wow I am loving this fanfic! U r and amazing writer!
Wow I am loving this fanfic! U r and amazing writer!
1/4/2016 c2 AnimeFlower
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...interesting...
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...interesting...
1/4/2016 c8 
8Ynot7
Pretty good, I especially liked seeing Black Star's interaction with Maka in the past. Curious, will Crona appear? He's my fav.
8Ynot7Pretty good, I especially liked seeing Black Star's interaction with Maka in the past. Curious, will Crona appear? He's my fav.
11/16/2014 c8 Triple threat 0
Totally cool thanks for letting us know that you weren't going to just stop writing the story and I don't know about others but I'll take the next chapter as a Christmas gift from you to me
Totally cool thanks for letting us know that you weren't going to just stop writing the story and I don't know about others but I'll take the next chapter as a Christmas gift from you to me