Reviews: When the Beat Stops

for When the Beat Stops

11/4/2013 c5 cupcake59193
OMG!OMG!OMG1OMG!OMG!
A PENNY!
oh, and great story. update soon! -

10/15/2013 c4

4I am the A
Oooh... I wonder what Soul's conditions are

10/15/2013 c4 Cherryberry998
This is an awesome chapter c:

10/15/2013 c4

6Anna114
Oh i think it's so good ! i hope you opdate soon !

10/15/2013 c4

6BeriForeverFan
plz update soon! :D

10/15/2013 c4 guest
Three things.
Incorrect characterization of Maka, Soul, and Black*star.
Show not tell.
Word choice. Statements are awkward between characters and slightly repetitive.
Also, avoid cliches.

10/15/2013 c1

36LiKaTaSa
I like... Maka being Black*Star's brother is just... awesome. I'm gonna keep readin' nowwww.

10/15/2013 c4

1SnowTamashi Ai
I lpve this story keep updating lol

10/9/2013 c3

6Mufasamustgo
OMG! awesome storie! i was like, 0-0!? the whole time!
anyway peez update soon!

8/29/2013 c3

6BeriForeverFan
PLZ UPDATE SOON! I love this story it is amazing!

8/29/2013 c3

4I am the A
Yay! You updated!

8/28/2013 c3 lovelygirl4everlife
This is sol cute
I like it

8/10/2013 c2

6Anna114
Please Update soon, it's so cool

8/10/2013 c2 Cherryberry998
I Love this story! I can't wait for another chapter! c:

8/10/2013 c2

4I am the A
Cool! Can't wait for an update!

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