2/7/2003 c1 Me
Well, I read it...and I liked it! That was great even though I never saw the show...you are good at writing!
Well, I read it...and I liked it! That was great even though I never saw the show...you are good at writing!
10/7/2002 c1 Violet Queen Emily
Oh, please continue. Love the Katsu and Ryo pairing. It kind of inspired me to do a fan-fiction on Ryo's adventure in Digital World but a girl joins him and bla bla bla you'll find out later. Hehehe
Oh, please continue. Love the Katsu and Ryo pairing. It kind of inspired me to do a fan-fiction on Ryo's adventure in Digital World but a girl joins him and bla bla bla you'll find out later. Hehehe
8/31/2002 c1 17Digimagic
I loved it! It rules but can't help think about thing like what if Sarah was there? i like GameGirl's title but i also had an idea for a title "Don't die with me!" that's all i can think of and i thinks it's ok but GameGirl's is better!
Sarah: I like it to and i like GameGril' stitle for it but then who listens to ME!
Aki: Cool! Same as Sarah but i still hate you Sarah!
Sarah: WOW you called me by my first name!
Crystal: I liked it Sara can you not be a smart alike for one minute!
Sarah: NO! So shut it Sister!
Crystal: No you!
Sarah: You!
Aki: Shut it you two! Bye Katsu!
Sarah: Bye and I want my Digimon cards back Kat!
Crystal: Bye Kat!
I loved it! It rules but can't help think about thing like what if Sarah was there? i like GameGirl's title but i also had an idea for a title "Don't die with me!" that's all i can think of and i thinks it's ok but GameGirl's is better!
Sarah: I like it to and i like GameGril' stitle for it but then who listens to ME!
Aki: Cool! Same as Sarah but i still hate you Sarah!
Sarah: WOW you called me by my first name!
Crystal: I liked it Sara can you not be a smart alike for one minute!
Sarah: NO! So shut it Sister!
Crystal: No you!
Sarah: You!
Aki: Shut it you two! Bye Katsu!
Sarah: Bye and I want my Digimon cards back Kat!
Crystal: Bye Kat!
8/30/2002 c1 Rukki-san
That was goooood! I loved it! Though it was shorter than Suki's Saga, I think I liked it a little better...it was more exciting, I guess. You should make more like it. You should call it...umm..."Trapped With You"...like GameGirl said.
That was goooood! I loved it! Though it was shorter than Suki's Saga, I think I liked it a little better...it was more exciting, I guess. You should make more like it. You should call it...umm..."Trapped With You"...like GameGirl said.
8/28/2002 c1 248Heroine of the Valley
So cool. Hmm, I guess "Trapped With You" is a nice title.
Thank you for reading and reviewing First Crush! I've started a sequel to it. This time it's about Ai! It's called New Addiction.
So cool. Hmm, I guess "Trapped With You" is a nice title.
Thank you for reading and reviewing First Crush! I've started a sequel to it. This time it's about Ai! It's called New Addiction.