for Breaking the Bank9/3/2019 c1 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE THE DAMN THING anyways good fic
PLEASE UPDATE THE DAMN THING anyways good fic
1/21/2017 c15 
12shaadiaThePrincessOfWeird
Haha, put yourself into the story? Why not? That was clever XD
And good chapter too! The suspense is real!
12shaadiaThePrincessOfWeirdHaha, put yourself into the story? Why not? That was clever XD
And good chapter too! The suspense is real!
12/26/2016 c14 shaadiaThePrincessOfWeird
Say, I am glad to see this back! I thought it would be left hanging for good. Thank you for uploading, and yes, I see things are getting pretty interesting...
Say, I am glad to see this back! I thought it would be left hanging for good. Thank you for uploading, and yes, I see things are getting pretty interesting...
1/6/2015 c13 21Catch422
Hey guys, I've notice some glaring grammatical and story structure errors to this chapter and I wanted to apologize for them. Also, I am not dead, just working very hard in college. There will be another chapter very soon.
21Catch422Hey guys, I've notice some glaring grammatical and story structure errors to this chapter and I wanted to apologize for them. Also, I am not dead, just working very hard in college. There will be another chapter very soon.
8/27/2014 c13 1spencerhyam
Where did you go? Please update! It's a great story, and I'd hate to see it incomplete.
1spencerhyamWhere did you go? Please update! It's a great story, and I'd hate to see it incomplete.
5/29/2014 c13 Guest
Artemis fowl and Ocean thirteen this is the best
Artemis fowl and Ocean thirteen this is the best
2/24/2014 c8 Spudtron98
Oh you're a sadistic bastard, aren't ya?
Oh you're a sadistic bastard, aren't ya?
2/14/2014 c9 BeckettSimpleton
Sorry for not logging in, I'm on the iPad. What a dramatic end to the chapter! Clearly, all is not lost as I still have much to read but that's my fault not yours!
2 qualms, however. Firstly, I disagree with Artemist face-palming. It just seems like an un-Artemis thing to do. Secondly, I realise it's a little late in the game to say this, but I may as we'll say it anyway; it's a little odd having your narrator refer to Artemis as 'Arty.' It's very informal and in the original series not many people call him by that nickname, or at least not often. It seems very personal. I realise that you need another term to break the stream of Artemis-es but that term just seemed... Out of place...
Sorry for being so so so so behind. You may blame life. And also my art teacher.
Beckett Simpleton
Sorry for not logging in, I'm on the iPad. What a dramatic end to the chapter! Clearly, all is not lost as I still have much to read but that's my fault not yours!
2 qualms, however. Firstly, I disagree with Artemist face-palming. It just seems like an un-Artemis thing to do. Secondly, I realise it's a little late in the game to say this, but I may as we'll say it anyway; it's a little odd having your narrator refer to Artemis as 'Arty.' It's very informal and in the original series not many people call him by that nickname, or at least not often. It seems very personal. I realise that you need another term to break the stream of Artemis-es but that term just seemed... Out of place...
Sorry for being so so so so behind. You may blame life. And also my art teacher.
Beckett Simpleton
2/14/2014 c12 12shaadiaThePrincessOfWeird
WOW! I absolutely love how Doodah was yelling about his leg being stuck. And the part he revealed the video was fake. The expressions on their faces! I would've paid big time just to see Artemis shouting, "WHAT THE HELL?!" haha, lol yeah. You are amazing, and I really love this story.
12shaadiaThePrincessOfWeirdWOW! I absolutely love how Doodah was yelling about his leg being stuck. And the part he revealed the video was fake. The expressions on their faces! I would've paid big time just to see Artemis shouting, "WHAT THE HELL?!" haha, lol yeah. You are amazing, and I really love this story.
1/21/2014 c11 Spooths
Why doesn't Qwan/No1 put a time stop around the room where the diamonds are I so they can have time to get in and out without setting off any alarms?
Why doesn't Qwan/No1 put a time stop around the room where the diamonds are I so they can have time to get in and out without setting off any alarms?
1/5/2014 c11 shaadiaThePrincessOfWeird
Man, this fic is awesome. It should win an award or something. It's absolutely amazing and Artemis's plans are so original. Big fan :)
Man, this fic is awesome. It should win an award or something. It's absolutely amazing and Artemis's plans are so original. Big fan :)
12/20/2013 c10 shaadiaThePrincessOfWeird
Jon Spiro?! wow. How are they going to do this?!
please.
update.
I love your story as always! :)
Jon Spiro?! wow. How are they going to do this?!
please.
update.
I love your story as always! :)
12/20/2013 c1 nerd of tolkein
aaahhhhhhhhhhhhh another artemis fowl book this is the best thing since the hobbit movie cameout
-tolkein nerd
aaahhhhhhhhhhhhh another artemis fowl book this is the best thing since the hobbit movie cameout
-tolkein nerd
11/29/2013 c9 shaadiaThePrincessOfWeird
wow. yet another impressive chapter.
You gotta update soon, I'm really curious now.
wow. yet another impressive chapter.
You gotta update soon, I'm really curious now.