for Naruto On Board6/29/2022 c1 Guest
If he can’t use ninjutsu it’s not Naruto. You just didn’t want to flesh out an oc
If he can’t use ninjutsu it’s not Naruto. You just didn’t want to flesh out an oc
6/27/2022 c17 Dragoking1317
Does anyone else feel like nojiko doesn’t do any with out Naruto like she will die if she not near him
Does anyone else feel like nojiko doesn’t do any with out Naruto like she will die if she not near him
6/23/2022 c89 Heart of Darkness65
I really like the chapter i can't wait when luffy unlock his gear 5 and what power up naruto gonna have
I really like the chapter i can't wait when luffy unlock his gear 5 and what power up naruto gonna have
6/16/2022 c49 N
Next time you fucking write anything consider a story developement cause i don't fucking see any developement in any characters and are you fucking serious you fucking simp you put a nameless character like olive into ace arc what the actual fuck you simp did you even try to be origina rather than copying the series and adding characters that dont make sense into it rather than think about it you fucking yolo it like an idiot ruining it even further when you start adding characters you simp for in the mix
Next time you fucking write anything consider a story developement cause i don't fucking see any developement in any characters and are you fucking serious you fucking simp you put a nameless character like olive into ace arc what the actual fuck you simp did you even try to be origina rather than copying the series and adding characters that dont make sense into it rather than think about it you fucking yolo it like an idiot ruining it even further when you start adding characters you simp for in the mix
6/13/2022 c17 N
Who's mai?
Who's mai?
6/11/2022 c18 
12Gold Testament
To be fair there are some filler arcs that can add to character development. My favorite to reference is the saiyan saga of DBZ which has a bunch of filler during the year of training. Main time we saw development was with Gohan who started to grow while surviving the first six months.
12Gold TestamentTo be fair there are some filler arcs that can add to character development. My favorite to reference is the saiyan saga of DBZ which has a bunch of filler during the year of training. Main time we saw development was with Gohan who started to grow while surviving the first six months.
6/7/2022 c11 Gold Testament
Oh my God you absolute fucking GENIUS! YOU GAVE CROCUS AND LABOON THE FREQUENCY OF NARUTO'S DEN-DEN MUSHI, WHICH MEANS IF THEY MOVE IT TO THE SUNNY LATER, THEN AS SOON AS THEY TAKE OUT MORIA THEY CAN CALL CROCUS AND LABOON AND TELL THEM ABOUT BROOK! When that happens Brook could tell Crocus immediately about the fate of the Rumbar Pirates. How Yorkie left because he fell deathly ill, and how the others were killed in the Florian Triangle with him surviving cause of his devil fruit.
Oh my God you absolute fucking GENIUS! YOU GAVE CROCUS AND LABOON THE FREQUENCY OF NARUTO'S DEN-DEN MUSHI, WHICH MEANS IF THEY MOVE IT TO THE SUNNY LATER, THEN AS SOON AS THEY TAKE OUT MORIA THEY CAN CALL CROCUS AND LABOON AND TELL THEM ABOUT BROOK! When that happens Brook could tell Crocus immediately about the fate of the Rumbar Pirates. How Yorkie left because he fell deathly ill, and how the others were killed in the Florian Triangle with him surviving cause of his devil fruit.
6/7/2022 c89 25killerssg
I liked the chapter and can't wait for the next one. I only wish that there would've been some reaction from him when he saw the top of the mountain get blown off by Kaido instead of him just glaring but overall good so far.
25killerssgI liked the chapter and can't wait for the next one. I only wish that there would've been some reaction from him when he saw the top of the mountain get blown off by Kaido instead of him just glaring but overall good so far.
6/6/2022 c89 daanyaalsumra
yo can you please give Naruto a devil fruit.
probably an awesome one
something like Ryomen Sukuna power.
or atleast a really good devil fruit ya know.
yo can you please give Naruto a devil fruit.
probably an awesome one
something like Ryomen Sukuna power.
or atleast a really good devil fruit ya know.
6/5/2022 c89 Borello
nice work.
nice work.
6/5/2022 c2 ThousandDaysOfLaziness
It's pretty hard to read - grammar is pretty bad. Especially reading the dialogs is not pleasant.
It's pretty hard to read - grammar is pretty bad. Especially reading the dialogs is not pleasant.
6/4/2022 c89 14Power of Magic
That was quite a chapter, and I look forward to how the next one goes. Lets hope that Naruto'll be able to destroy that Sea Prism Stone box, as he's not eaten a Devil Fruit, which should mean he might be able to it. It'll be interesting how things will go for everyone, and that their plans go as smooth as possible
14Power of MagicThat was quite a chapter, and I look forward to how the next one goes. Lets hope that Naruto'll be able to destroy that Sea Prism Stone box, as he's not eaten a Devil Fruit, which should mean he might be able to it. It'll be interesting how things will go for everyone, and that their plans go as smooth as possible