for Naruto On Board11/30/2024 c104 Borello
really interesting work
really interesting work
11/27/2024 c104 
14Power of Magic
I wonder if Naruto will be able to unlock some kind of hidden technique or power, that he'll be able to use against Kaido
14Power of MagicI wonder if Naruto will be able to unlock some kind of hidden technique or power, that he'll be able to use against Kaido
11/14/2024 c103 Guest
Yeah good job asshole, tell us detailed exactly on their every action to the point when will they shit themselves on those feces from the bottom, fucking tell us what they wear down to nook and cranny, you should become a designer and as always your stupid grammar
Yeah good job asshole, tell us detailed exactly on their every action to the point when will they shit themselves on those feces from the bottom, fucking tell us what they wear down to nook and cranny, you should become a designer and as always your stupid grammar
11/6/2024 c24 frazierkindrel
will naruto get some kind of power up or devil fruit or something or will he be only physical and haki based?
will naruto get some kind of power up or devil fruit or something or will he be only physical and haki based?
11/2/2024 c103 Guest
This fanfiction is ass the fight scene's are literally garbage they need more work. I would of liked more original fanfiction but I guess that's to much to ask for on this site
This fanfiction is ass the fight scene's are literally garbage they need more work. I would of liked more original fanfiction but I guess that's to much to ask for on this site
10/24/2024 c10 10Marcii Winters
Listen, now that you're this far into the fic, I really think you should go back and separate the dialogue a little better bc it's hard to read
Like
"Oi, I'm hungry." Zoro said.
"Shut it, Marimo! It's ladies first, always!"
Idk if FFN comments will show it bc sometimes they compress comments if there's unnecessary spaces but there needs a space between Zoro's dialogue and Sanji's so it reads more smoothly
I have a hard time keeping up with who's talking!
10Marcii WintersListen, now that you're this far into the fic, I really think you should go back and separate the dialogue a little better bc it's hard to read
Like
"Oi, I'm hungry." Zoro said.
"Shut it, Marimo! It's ladies first, always!"
Idk if FFN comments will show it bc sometimes they compress comments if there's unnecessary spaces but there needs a space between Zoro's dialogue and Sanji's so it reads more smoothly
I have a hard time keeping up with who's talking!
10/24/2024 c5 Marcii Winters
You know, I'm thinking
Kinda like Zoro's Tatsumaki, it would not only make a lot of sense but it would also be a sort of homage to canon Naruto if he had at least one attack that like, used his insane strength and created some kind of Wind attack, u know?
You know, I'm thinking
Kinda like Zoro's Tatsumaki, it would not only make a lot of sense but it would also be a sort of homage to canon Naruto if he had at least one attack that like, used his insane strength and created some kind of Wind attack, u know?
10/24/2024 c4 Marcii Winters
Okay, at first, I was kinda iffy on reading a fic where Naruto has absolutely no powers besides his ridiculous strength, but the longer I read, the more interesting this gets!
Bc like, yeah, even regular One Piece fics rarely give MCs other than Luffy no Devil Fruit or System or other power system!
I'm excited to see a Naruto with like, Garp or Roger's strength in Haki!
I do love the idea of Trench Knives just so Naruto has a bit more variety tho!
Okay, at first, I was kinda iffy on reading a fic where Naruto has absolutely no powers besides his ridiculous strength, but the longer I read, the more interesting this gets!
Bc like, yeah, even regular One Piece fics rarely give MCs other than Luffy no Devil Fruit or System or other power system!
I'm excited to see a Naruto with like, Garp or Roger's strength in Haki!
I do love the idea of Trench Knives just so Naruto has a bit more variety tho!
10/23/2024 c103 Borello
really nice work
really nice work
10/21/2024 c103 14Power of Magic
I too had heard that the One Piece anime was taking a break, as Oda was turning his attention to season 2 of the live action One Piece and other projects that he might have
14Power of MagicI too had heard that the One Piece anime was taking a break, as Oda was turning his attention to season 2 of the live action One Piece and other projects that he might have
9/23/2024 c102 Borello
nice work
nice work