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2/17/2016 c59 SlyFox9
Please update the story
2/17/2016 c48 25JensenDaniels32
AWW COME ON! ADD OLIVE!
2/14/2016 c1 monkiepawn
Why does Naruto a 'bounty hunter' shakes the hand of a self proclaimed 'Pirate King'?
He just glued himself to the story instead of playing with it, we dont even know the 'why' of his actions or/and motives.
2/13/2016 c1 DLan
For a first story it's not a bad start.
Though you need to work on describing characters appearance.
Advice, sometimes you don't have to go to too much detail into their looks or sometimes you don't have to at all. After all this is a One Piece/Naruto fanfic so people will know what they look like.
Also once you've described someone there is no need to repeat it, readers should already have an image in their heads.
2/13/2016 c59 MrGreed666
I've been reading this story for a while and I just wanted to say good job, this will be my first review since I started and I must say I'm really enjoying myself. Also I may P.M. you later with a couple of O.C. characters I thought of and created myself along with a few DF abilities and attacks If you're interested of course. Until next time, Ja ne.
2/10/2016 c59 PlrStaley
Epic chapter keep it up!
2/10/2016 c56 chris009
naruto 550-600 million bounty
2/9/2016 c48 chris009
3 add her to the harem and i think it showed her using a mace like alvida
2/9/2016 c46 chris009
5. a snake of some kind.
2/8/2016 c59 kage88
good one
2/7/2016 c59 StrongGuy159
Cool chapter continue please.
2/7/2016 c59 1gamma.hulk179
Wouldn't it be easier to let sanji have viola

So there room for Rebecca?
2/7/2016 c59 21Czar Joseph
Well this is expecting.
2/7/2016 c59 jonale.fm
love the new ch and hope to read very soon
2/7/2016 c59 4Gamelover41592
awesome work on this chapter well worth the wait but why are you adding violet to the harem?
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