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11/6/2020 c3 luffy1996
Making Naruto already have a fight against Jimbei under his belt doesn't make much sense in your lore of him combined with your Author notes. You revealed him as the Greatest bounty hunter in the East Blue (used to be Zoro's title but whatever), but then you have him challenge one of the most notorious Pirates in the Grandline who was considered a 250 million belli bounty before becoming a Warlord. Naruto getting a few hits in would be shocking enough as you said preAlabasta is fodder to him, but actually managing to put up a fight would mean Naruto's potential threat level is atleast 200 million belli.
11/3/2020 c77 1hellfire45
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next
11/3/2020 c24 8Cloud Narukami
I know this and the chapters leading up to this and the foreseeable future were written years ago but the whole pacing is so off things just happen really fast and it doesn't feel like the characters even acknowledge things happen because things just happen and they quickly move on
11/1/2020 c77 4hallowmask123
I only have one concern about this entire chapter and that's the entire lack of Naruto even being there you only mentioned him in the recap so where is he during this entire thing cuz you put him in the book prison but you don't write him there
10/28/2020 c77 7Power of Magic
A good chapter, and I look forward to seeing how things go in the next one
10/28/2020 c77 yulikurniasih86
Next thor
10/28/2020 c77 StrongGuy159
Cool chapter continue please.
10/28/2020 c77 4Gamelover41592
excellent work on this chapter
10/28/2020 c77 Samuel Santillan
I'm glad I'll be waiting for the next one and you didn't mention Naruto in the chapter.
10/15/2020 c52 VixEveningShade
You're asking about bounty eh? If you ask me That Naruto should not EXIST in this fic in the first place... That OC of yours is an insult to the name "Naruto"
10/15/2020 c34 VixEveningShade
Ok I honestly didn't want to review but enough is enough! This shit isn't even Naruto. You're writing some kind of OC with the name Naruto... Please just please make it OC, I really don't want to see a Naruto more pathetic than the one in original... And you're on your way to over achieve it
10/12/2020 c50 14Rubius
I really thought perona and olive would also marry naruto, maybe later right? Still love this story.
10/9/2020 c41 Rubius
Saw the poll and was wondering is Margaret and sandersonia would join too?
10/9/2020 c40 Rubius
I honestly thought perona was going to join the harem, but forgot kuma sent her flying. Keep up the good story work, i can't stop reading.
9/24/2020 c5 myafroatemydog
Hopefully no Naruto villains
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