for Naruto On Board6/6/2013 c2 
24917brat
I like this and I can't wait to see what you are going to have happen please keep it up.
24917bratI like this and I can't wait to see what you are going to have happen please keep it up.
6/6/2013 c2 1fighting hope
this is a good story keep up the good work and are you planning on giving Naruto a devil fruit?
1fighting hopethis is a good story keep up the good work and are you planning on giving Naruto a devil fruit?
6/6/2013 c2 Yuuki Heartfilia-Dragneel
wow interesting love the story good beginning hope to read more soon one question in arabasta is naruto going to fight with a character form naruto maybe like gaara oe zabiza and so on. Looking fwd to the next chapter keep up the good work :)
wow interesting love the story good beginning hope to read more soon one question in arabasta is naruto going to fight with a character form naruto maybe like gaara oe zabiza and so on. Looking fwd to the next chapter keep up the good work :)
6/6/2013 c2 6Jebest4781
fun chapter and like how it turned out. yeah figured that you would have Naruto be a bit simular to Zoro in this that Naruto would have Kyuubi behind him for his techniques and such. anyways wondering what the pairing for this story is and maybe wondering if you will have Nojiko paired up with Naruto
6Jebest4781fun chapter and like how it turned out. yeah figured that you would have Naruto be a bit simular to Zoro in this that Naruto would have Kyuubi behind him for his techniques and such. anyways wondering what the pairing for this story is and maybe wondering if you will have Nojiko paired up with Naruto
6/6/2013 c1 Jebest4781
well it was nice of you to have Naruto to not let Nami's money be taken and back on canon I hated it a lot. anyways going to read more of this story and see whats up.
well it was nice of you to have Naruto to not let Nami's money be taken and back on canon I hated it a lot. anyways going to read more of this story and see whats up.
6/6/2013 c2 11bloodyhound17
Suspense is in thee air
It seems you know what you are doing
Plz cont. Or suffer my wrath
Shishishishi
11bloodyhound17Suspense is in thee air
It seems you know what you are doing
Plz cont. Or suffer my wrath
Shishishishi
6/5/2013 c2 kendryn
hmmm ok yea i like this no ninjutsu or devil fruit just an average dude (err kinda) like Rayleigh, shanks, and garp (hopefully you'll give him haki). but i got to ask are you going to do any pairings in this story?
hmmm ok yea i like this no ninjutsu or devil fruit just an average dude (err kinda) like Rayleigh, shanks, and garp (hopefully you'll give him haki). but i got to ask are you going to do any pairings in this story?
6/5/2013 c2 6Lightningblade49
Naruto has Super DStrength like Tsunade wonder if he can use haki either way you can see why he's called strongest in east Blue.
Id like to see Naruto face someone worthy of his Power so he get's a good bounty.
6Lightningblade49Naruto has Super DStrength like Tsunade wonder if he can use haki either way you can see why he's called strongest in east Blue.
Id like to see Naruto face someone worthy of his Power so he get's a good bounty.
6/5/2013 c2 Rezdek
It probably would be better if Naruto fought his own enemies cause a lot of the battles in OP were important for some characters. Other than that, good job on the chapter. Looking forward to the next update.
It probably would be better if Naruto fought his own enemies cause a lot of the battles in OP were important for some characters. Other than that, good job on the chapter. Looking forward to the next update.
6/3/2013 c1 11bloodyhound17
Wolf plz continue so this hound can read your story and not kill u for not continuing
11bloodyhound17Wolf plz continue so this hound can read your story and not kill u for not continuing
6/2/2013 c1 3Raidentensho
not bad at all. curious on naruto's backstory in later chapters. until then, ja!
3Raidentenshonot bad at all. curious on naruto's backstory in later chapters. until then, ja!