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6/3/2013 c1 11bloodyhound17
Wolf plz continue so this hound can read your story and not kill u for not continuing
6/2/2013 c1 3Raidentensho
not bad at all. curious on naruto's backstory in later chapters. until then, ja!
6/2/2013 c1 5Jack Grey Logan
Does naruto has a devil fruit.
6/1/2013 c1 1Xion The XIV
This isn't bad for a first story. For tips you need to tell us what you plan on Naruto's abilities. Or if he will use devil fruit. I can't really think of anything original for abilities or weapons he can use. Swords are out!(Every damn story has Naruto using a sword or dual blades, Gonna make a sword make it look like Mihawks least his is awesome.) If your going to have Naruto have a devil fruit just do the cop out the show does and add the fruit name and the attack he is about to do. (Seriously luffy ate the gum gum fruit so all of his attacks go Gum Gum no pistol: basically says rubber rubber pistol.) OHHHHH give him the Zoan fruit Model Fenrir. Sorry just so sick of everyone uses some bullshit biju fruit model Kyuubi so boring every story using a fox.
6/1/2013 c1 tstoldt
Have him use a kurisigama scythe and chain he can spin it and make malestorm techniques
6/1/2013 c1 kendryn
hmmm ok i can get into this pretty easy as for sites to go back and watch old episodes i've always used hulu the only bad part is the ads.
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