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6/6/2013 c2 1fighting hope
this is a good story keep up the good work and are you planning on giving Naruto a devil fruit?
6/6/2013 c2 Yuuki Heartfilia-Dragneel
wow interesting love the story good beginning hope to read more soon one question in arabasta is naruto going to fight with a character form naruto maybe like gaara oe zabiza and so on. Looking fwd to the next chapter keep up the good work :)
6/6/2013 c2 6Jebest4781
fun chapter and like how it turned out. yeah figured that you would have Naruto be a bit simular to Zoro in this that Naruto would have Kyuubi behind him for his techniques and such. anyways wondering what the pairing for this story is and maybe wondering if you will have Nojiko paired up with Naruto
6/6/2013 c1 Jebest4781
well it was nice of you to have Naruto to not let Nami's money be taken and back on canon I hated it a lot. anyways going to read more of this story and see whats up.
6/6/2013 c2 11bloodyhound17
Suspense is in thee air
It seems you know what you are doing
Plz cont. Or suffer my wrath
6/5/2013 c2 kendryn
hmmm ok yea i like this no ninjutsu or devil fruit just an average dude (err kinda) like Rayleigh, shanks, and garp (hopefully you'll give him haki). but i got to ask are you going to do any pairings in this story?
6/5/2013 c2 6Lightningblade49
Naruto has Super DStrength like Tsunade wonder if he can use haki either way you can see why he's called strongest in east Blue.
Id like to see Naruto face someone worthy of his Power so he get's a good bounty.
6/5/2013 c2 1Vandun
if your not giving naruto a df, will he be capable of haki?
6/5/2013 c2 Rezdek
It probably would be better if Naruto fought his own enemies cause a lot of the battles in OP were important for some characters. Other than that, good job on the chapter. Looking forward to the next update.
6/5/2013 c2 1hellshadowreaper
will there be any parings?
6/3/2013 c1 11bloodyhound17
Wolf plz continue so this hound can read your story and not kill u for not continuing
6/2/2013 c1 3Raidentensho
not bad at all. curious on naruto's backstory in later chapters. until then, ja!
6/2/2013 c1 4Jack Grey Logan
Does naruto has a devil fruit.
6/1/2013 c1 1Xion The XIV
This isn't bad for a first story. For tips you need to tell us what you plan on Naruto's abilities. Or if he will use devil fruit. I can't really think of anything original for abilities or weapons he can use. Swords are out!(Every damn story has Naruto using a sword or dual blades, Gonna make a sword make it look like Mihawks least his is awesome.) If your going to have Naruto have a devil fruit just do the cop out the show does and add the fruit name and the attack he is about to do. (Seriously luffy ate the gum gum fruit so all of his attacks go Gum Gum no pistol: basically says rubber rubber pistol.) OHHHHH give him the Zoan fruit Model Fenrir. Sorry just so sick of everyone uses some bullshit biju fruit model Kyuubi so boring every story using a fox.
6/1/2013 c1 tstoldt
Have him use a kurisigama scythe and chain he can spin it and make malestorm techniques
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