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2/24/2014 c11 HarleyQuinn19
why i like the story the way it is.
10/14/2013 c2 rosesilver999
I'm too lazy to login but that's my username...

Omg love your story! Well I mostly just love fang. ... but your dtory is super good lol. I love nudges rambles, 'you have a scary glare too!' Haha
9/23/2013 c11 4BiteMeBro522
soo into the story! update soon!
9/18/2013 c9 Guest
I HATE YOU DYLAN YOU MESS UP EVERYBODY'S LIFE IM SO ANGRY I COULD JUST(strangles pillow angrily)
Much better... NOT!
I'm not going to have to force you to listen to my endless ranting about my hate for Dylan, so...

Great story, very sad, DO NOT GIVE UP ON IT UNTIL YOU COMPLETE IT OR ELSE I WILL STRANGLE MY PILLOW AGAIN...
(Pets bunny, who goes to sleep on my lap) Mucha better
yay
8/29/2013 c11 Guest
I love this story don't delete just do the next chapter
8/24/2013 c11 winggirl27
No Don't Delete Me Liketh!
8/18/2013 c9 Guest
niggy
8/18/2013 c11 3CookieMonstersRUs
Okay, but hurry soon because I liked the story anyway even with the grammar issues.
8/17/2013 c11 Doodle0505
Awwww i do like the story plot :) hope you have luck with your new story
8/17/2013 c11 33ThingsWithWings
Noooo! Dude, no! You can't just get eleven chapters into a story and then DELETE IT! No! That's not what you do. No. Uh-uh. No. NO! Jeez, the next time I see you, you are going to be dead. I'm serious. You and me are going to have WORDS. Kapeche? I'm not even going to wink.

-YourMoreThanAngryFriend
8/6/2013 c10 3CookieMonstersRUs
Iwant to know more! Its saddening and tragic and its got me at its claws and I can't shake free!-not that I want to... :)
7/20/2013 c10 10Freezing Fyre
Good story... But you might want to use spell check and re-read/edit them before posting. Just a couple grammatical/spelling errors.
7/19/2013 c10 33ThingsWithWings
Hey! A normal review for once!

Suggestion: Max is at lunch and Lissa stands up and follows her to "the bathroom". Max knows she's following her, but she doesn't let on. She walks to the bathroom and stops. She says, "You know, Lissa. You think you're so great because everyone 'likes' you. But in all honestly, what's that special about you? Have you dated every guy in the school? Okay, so you're a slut. But do you really think you could-" Lissa slaps her and she turns around, her face like "the eye of a hurricane. It's calm, then all of a sudden, sh*t gets real." She can tell by the look on Lissa's artificial face. And then she reaches out and slaps her so hard Lissa passes out. The end. But wait, there's more! Max starts to freak out, then decides to leave her a note and let her "sleep."

Yeah. I'm proud of myself. I don't normally think of stuff like this. (;

3ThingsWithWings
7/18/2013 c10 Chairwomanmeow15
Woo! Awesome chapter!
7/10/2013 c9 Guest
okay you have to write more
or i'll steel ur cookies
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