for Memories8/21/2019 c1 witchgirl
i cant fuckin believe ive only seen this now. thank you thank you for this. ashura needs appreciation. i always cry reading celes arc just because of his pure love for fai
i cant fuckin believe ive only seen this now. thank you thank you for this. ashura needs appreciation. i always cry reading celes arc just because of his pure love for fai
9/3/2018 c1 i00Al
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7/5/2018 c14 James Birdsong
Cool four chapters
Cool four chapters
7/8/2015 c5 
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Ashura-ou! Fai may be an adult in years, but he's physically and mentally a child! Don't give alcohol to a child! …Actually, don't give alcohol to anyone, period. So no, OF COURSE IT'S NOT THE RESPONSIBLE THING TO DO!
1pikaree1Ashura-ou! Fai may be an adult in years, but he's physically and mentally a child! Don't give alcohol to a child! …Actually, don't give alcohol to anyone, period. So no, OF COURSE IT'S NOT THE RESPONSIBLE THING TO DO!
7/8/2015 c4 pikaree1
Fai is practically a human dog himself. That makes no sense, but I'm sticking with it.
Fai is practically a human dog himself. That makes no sense, but I'm sticking with it.
5/19/2015 c12 Emily and The White Rabbit
Most people write Ashura as a really really bad guy but what I got from him is that he really is such a kind and fatherly figure to Fai, who unfortunately went mad I love reading Ashura as kind and nice and so gentle with Fai ; w ; I love your fic so much I read it in one go. I really like how you portrayed a fatherly Ashura and the little Fai. So cute.
Most people write Ashura as a really really bad guy but what I got from him is that he really is such a kind and fatherly figure to Fai, who unfortunately went mad I love reading Ashura as kind and nice and so gentle with Fai ; w ; I love your fic so much I read it in one go. I really like how you portrayed a fatherly Ashura and the little Fai. So cute.
10/12/2014 c10 98Sybil Rowan
Very cute. I loved the part about the mustache; it was too funny. I love Fai and Ashura parent-child stories. You did a good job.
98Sybil RowanVery cute. I loved the part about the mustache; it was too funny. I love Fai and Ashura parent-child stories. You did a good job.
10/8/2014 c10 James Birdsong
Cool six chapters.
Cool six chapters.
10/2/2014 c9 1Lodowa Korona
This is such a nice story. I love reading it and I'm always looking forward to seeing more. Hope you update soon! :)
1Lodowa KoronaThis is such a nice story. I love reading it and I'm always looking forward to seeing more. Hope you update soon! :)
12/30/2013 c8 Durbe the Barian
That last line was absolutely adorable. I wish I found the time to read this earlier. :)
That last line was absolutely adorable. I wish I found the time to read this earlier. :)
10/28/2013 c7 Durbe the Barian
Nice work, Ashura. You gave a kid a hangover. Now that I think about it, how old IS Fai anyway?
Now to Kyoko0001: These are adorable. I love these little things with Ashura and Fai. It gives us at least an idea on what he COULD have been like before everything went downhill for poor Fai all over again.
Just a couple of things I noticed.
First: "I assume you mean know." Did you mean "I assume you know," or, "I assume you mean no."
Second: "I know you didn't magically for get how to speak." I think you separated 'forget.'
Other than that, poor Fai. He's gonna be feeling that in the morning. Maybe that's the reason he's so good at holding his liquor.
Nice work, Ashura. You gave a kid a hangover. Now that I think about it, how old IS Fai anyway?
Now to Kyoko0001: These are adorable. I love these little things with Ashura and Fai. It gives us at least an idea on what he COULD have been like before everything went downhill for poor Fai all over again.
Just a couple of things I noticed.
First: "I assume you mean know." Did you mean "I assume you know," or, "I assume you mean no."
Second: "I know you didn't magically for get how to speak." I think you separated 'forget.'
Other than that, poor Fai. He's gonna be feeling that in the morning. Maybe that's the reason he's so good at holding his liquor.
8/20/2013 c4 James Birdsong
Nice four chapters
Nice four chapters
7/23/2013 c2 98Sybil Rowan
Another nicely written drabble showing that King Ashura also depends on Fai a great deal too. Very sweet. Please, you must post more.
98Sybil RowanAnother nicely written drabble showing that King Ashura also depends on Fai a great deal too. Very sweet. Please, you must post more.