for Forgotten7/1/2015 c1 Guest
Yes make it a multichap!
I love Thalia! ;)
Great job!
Yes make it a multichap!
I love Thalia! ;)
Great job!
1/8/2014 c1 Guest
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8/9/2013 c1 1 PJO FAN
Awesomne, EPIC! cOOL. nICE WORK - 1 PERCY JACKSON FAN. (SORRY i DIDN'T LOG INTO MY ACCOUNT, MY pc WONT ALLOW ME)
Awesomne, EPIC! cOOL. nICE WORK - 1 PERCY JACKSON FAN. (SORRY i DIDN'T LOG INTO MY ACCOUNT, MY pc WONT ALLOW ME)
7/5/2013 c1 Ana di Angelo
you really should add a chapter about Thalia telling the campers thestory of the heroes that she fought beside, preferentially around the campfire.
please, Ana di Angelo
you really should add a chapter about Thalia telling the campers thestory of the heroes that she fought beside, preferentially around the campfire.
please, Ana di Angelo
7/3/2013 c1 Guest
ABSOLUTELY ADD A CHAPTER WHERE THALIA TELLS THEM! MAKE THE CHAPTER EXTRA LONG, and add in campers' POV.
ABSOLUTELY ADD A CHAPTER WHERE THALIA TELLS THEM! MAKE THE CHAPTER EXTRA LONG, and add in campers' POV.
7/1/2013 c1 
44M1ssUnd3rst4nd1ng
This is soo good. Very moving, very well put together. I've thought a good bit about Thalia in the later years, but this particular idea hadn't even occurred to me. I like it. One suggestion: you might want to change your rating; I don't think the "d-word" is allowed in a "K" rating. Oh, and you don't really need to say point-of-view changes when you're in third person point of view like that, it's well-written enough already that it's easy to follow.
As for continuing, please do. I would love to see Thalia (in all her immortal scary awesomeness) going around and basically forcing frightened little campers who've never fought a war to listen to all her old war stories, and her memories of her friends and family (including Nico, 'cause he's my favorite). I just find that thought really amusing in a bittersweet kind of way.
Carry on, my friend.
44M1ssUnd3rst4nd1ngThis is soo good. Very moving, very well put together. I've thought a good bit about Thalia in the later years, but this particular idea hadn't even occurred to me. I like it. One suggestion: you might want to change your rating; I don't think the "d-word" is allowed in a "K" rating. Oh, and you don't really need to say point-of-view changes when you're in third person point of view like that, it's well-written enough already that it's easy to follow.
As for continuing, please do. I would love to see Thalia (in all her immortal scary awesomeness) going around and basically forcing frightened little campers who've never fought a war to listen to all her old war stories, and her memories of her friends and family (including Nico, 'cause he's my favorite). I just find that thought really amusing in a bittersweet kind of way.
Carry on, my friend.
6/15/2013 c1 1poseidonson
This is really awesome! PLEASE WRITE MORE!haha. My eyes actually watered and everything
1poseidonsonThis is really awesome! PLEASE WRITE MORE!haha. My eyes actually watered and everything
6/12/2013 c1 GHHRTYUZXXDS
This is amazing. I actually cried, because I think about this a lot. I think you encompassed it really well.
This is amazing. I actually cried, because I think about this a lot. I think you encompassed it really well.
6/4/2013 c1 austrian-guest
Please write another chapter about Thalia telling the campers about the Heroes who fought in the second titan war!
Great story ;)
Please write another chapter about Thalia telling the campers about the Heroes who fought in the second titan war!
Great story ;)
6/3/2013 c1 The Last Child
Yes! Please do both of the things you suggested doing! I love this story! I can just see Thalia storming up to those kids and scaring the crap out of them! I WANT MORE! please.
Yes! Please do both of the things you suggested doing! I love this story! I can just see Thalia storming up to those kids and scaring the crap out of them! I WANT MORE! please.