for Naruto Senju Uchiha12/15/2020 c21 Guest
kabuto isnt that strong...
he was nearly beat with a NORMAL rasengan. How would he survive a rasenshuriken?
kabuto isnt that strong...
he was nearly beat with a NORMAL rasengan. How would he survive a rasenshuriken?
10/7/2020 c35 123
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10/6/2020 c35 Guest
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9/29/2020 c21 Guest
Regeneration factor or not, Kabuto should not have survived a rasenshurken. I mean the only person I can think of that tanked one dead on was a juubi powered god madara.
Regeneration factor or not, Kabuto should not have survived a rasenshurken. I mean the only person I can think of that tanked one dead on was a juubi powered god madara.
3/5/2020 c6 Guest
This story kinda has bad grammar
This story kinda has bad grammar
1/2/2020 c35 Fan
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7/10/2019 c28 Dragonfist238
I do love the story so far but I was wondering why Your version of Team Kakashi isn’t used very often. Instead Sakura is being used
I do love the story so far but I was wondering why Your version of Team Kakashi isn’t used very often. Instead Sakura is being used
6/13/2019 c35 Guest
like your story can you get to the fourth great shinobi war
like your story can you get to the fourth great shinobi war
1/24/2019 c6 
1Wassa110
I can't read anymore. Your grammar is decent, and the story has decent pacing, but it's just bland. I read, but feel nothing. In Birth Of The Forest you get this sense of Awe when he uses his power, in Legacy you get the same whether he uses the Sharingan, or the Rinnegan. You get none of that here. There's no real sense of weight here either. No sense of danger. Over-all I rate it a 3/10. It's average in grammar, and pacing, but with there being no real feeling, it brings it down. I could read it, but it'd be the same as eating unsalted crackers.
Thanks,
Warryn.
1Wassa110I can't read anymore. Your grammar is decent, and the story has decent pacing, but it's just bland. I read, but feel nothing. In Birth Of The Forest you get this sense of Awe when he uses his power, in Legacy you get the same whether he uses the Sharingan, or the Rinnegan. You get none of that here. There's no real sense of weight here either. No sense of danger. Over-all I rate it a 3/10. It's average in grammar, and pacing, but with there being no real feeling, it brings it down. I could read it, but it'd be the same as eating unsalted crackers.
Thanks,
Warryn.