4/2 c31 Schazmen
Honestly, I thought this was finished at this point, but turns out that nope. And I am very happy, because I've binged this story now over the past two days.

3/27 c9 kerikheuer.01
just a heads up, the lethal kill radius of a current US ARMY hand thrown grenade is 15 m. that means anyone that isn't behind hardcover has significant body armor or is inside an armored vehicle is dead if they're within 50 ft of where a grenade goes off.

the scenes you see in a movie where grenade goes off in a room and people survive is a bunch of bthe lethal kill radius for artillery shells is around 30 to 50 m for people that are not behind hardcover or inside an armored personnel carrier

3/24 c31 40Demon Eyes Laharl
Just wanted to point out, the Geth War was only called the Morning War by the Geth. Unless your implying something when the Salarian Councilor called it by that specific name, I believe you made a small mistake.

2/27 c31 Guest
Muy bueno

2/12 c31 Naedine-Daki
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2/10 c12 2Wolfwaffe
For some reason at the very last sentence, my brain automatically added 'with all that implies, too.'.

2/5 c4 Salko
This would be better labeled as a reference chapter like a key on a map

2/2 c31 HelpingHand
Good few chapters since I last read. I had some thoughts.

Aren't orbital bombardments of garden worlds outlawed by the council? Shouldn’t they need to make some sort of exception now that they have seen recordings on that thing and realize it was necessary and could be in the future?

I hope we see Sparatus’s reaction to seeing the recordings of the entity in the Turian city. So he knows everything his actions caused. Or will his punishment be to stay in jail for the rest of his life and he needs to watch those recordings once a day, every day, until he dies. Would his mind just think of them as special effects after a while.

The Volus will be happy someone else will be dealing with monsters. Better the spectors than them.

I feel like the Quarians will set up a system to get human advice whenever something weird happens. Humans would be ok with false alarms as they won’t want the Quarians to hesitate when it is real. Also only the Quarians military can talk to humans as none of the politicians want to deal with that shit.

I feel like Nator should have made it so he can't see or hear outside of his suit when he was on the bridge again after what happened last time. See no evil, speak no evil.

I hope humans become friends with the Geth somehow.

I feel scared for the Hanar. If human criminals get into Citadel space they will be the easiest target. They are super religious so someone just needs to change their body and call themselves a Prothean then the whole society will follow them. The one leader did what the Reapers wanted when they were told the Collectors used to be the Protheans. If it happened in one timeline it can happen in this one as well.

We never saw what a Reaper husk of a Hanar was so if the human criminals improve their bodies they could be hard to fight. Most people are used to fighting things that walk not slither on the ground, walls or ceiling. Not to mention move through water pipes to flank enemies or assassinate leaders in their sleep. Also the ability to match the color of their surroundings. A toxin on their skin that can kill an Engel. The holy war could set the galaxy on fire.