
8/3/2015 c1 Guest
Pretty bad grammar. No offense but it sounds like it was written by a five year old
Pretty bad grammar. No offense but it sounds like it was written by a five year old
6/7/2014 c3 Ririka Rose
I was thinking maybe they were brothers and sisters. Seem like I was correct
I was thinking maybe they were brothers and sisters. Seem like I was correct
4/6/2014 c6
5Matchmakingdove1028
AWWWWWWWWWW! POOR STING! XDDDD Can't wait for more! XD
also why are they keeping their relationship a secret?
This is funny and interesting but you have a lot of spelling mistackes, I hope you don't get offended.

AWWWWWWWWWW! POOR STING! XDDDD Can't wait for more! XD
also why are they keeping their relationship a secret?
This is funny and interesting but you have a lot of spelling mistackes, I hope you don't get offended.
3/2/2014 c6 elric lucy
onegai chapter 7 please
onegai chapter 7 please
1/22/2014 c5 shigemi-chan
WHAT?! and is rana an overly pertective sister or does she like her brother ?lucy should use the 88 star thing with gimini PLEASE update SOON!
WHAT?! and is rana an overly pertective sister or does she like her brother ?lucy should use the 88 star thing with gimini PLEASE update SOON!
10/23/2013 c4 ErynZ
HIYAAAAAA!
That's soooooo cooolllllll! Cat Fight! I always like that but with boys not girls... he he update soon yeah ( ouch now I sound like deidara-_-")
ganbatte anna-chan
HIYAAAAAA!
That's soooooo cooolllllll! Cat Fight! I always like that but with boys not girls... he he update soon yeah ( ouch now I sound like deidara-_-")
ganbatte anna-chan
6/22/2013 c2 aruaru
Rogue is so cute here XD
Rogue is so cute here XD
6/21/2013 c1 Mandywong422
I like it!More RoLu moment pls
I like it!More RoLu moment pls