
8/25 c18 EVIL-SAGE
the premise of this story is great and i love that naruto isnt some goofy goober, hes matured and ready to backhand any one.
the premise of this story is great and i love that naruto isnt some goofy goober, hes matured and ready to backhand any one.
7/30 c18
6ChubbyNingen
Since you’ve comeback for AFL, think you’ll be able to update this story as well at some point?

Since you’ve comeback for AFL, think you’ll be able to update this story as well at some point?
3/31 c1 Hyperman15
The more time they pass together with a large age gap, the more weird it feels. I hope they don’t get together. Or at least that that stay familial as equals for a while (years) before it starts to happen
The more time they pass together with a large age gap, the more weird it feels. I hope they don’t get together. Or at least that that stay familial as equals for a while (years) before it starts to happen
3/30 c18 Guest
How long will it take to get a another chapter of this story
How long will it take to get a another chapter of this story
1/5 c18 Kells
Good good I can't wait to see naruto fight laxus next chapter and can't wait to see what else happens next this is 1 of my favorite pairings and story keep it up
Good good I can't wait to see naruto fight laxus next chapter and can't wait to see what else happens next this is 1 of my favorite pairings and story keep it up
11/15/2022 c18 Danirodriguez1995
Please continue with the story, it's very good, please don't give up, a story that really has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a big fan of this type of story and the truth is that they have no comparison.
Please continue with the story, it's very good, please don't give up, a story that really has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a big fan of this type of story and the truth is that they have no comparison.
9/1/2022 c18 niideadequenombremecoloco
Why, why do you keep doing this, you write such great stories but leave them there unfinished after and epic moments, well it is also my fault for reading fics that were abandoned. stil, the dream of you continuing this story is there.
Why, why do you keep doing this, you write such great stories but leave them there unfinished after and epic moments, well it is also my fault for reading fics that were abandoned. stil, the dream of you continuing this story is there.
5/12/2022 c18 Guest
Is there gonna be another chapter
Is there gonna be another chapter