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I honestly wanted to like this story, but this is just bad. It's akin to sniffing a moldy egg casserole from the back of my fridge: a stupid waste of time for something rotten that belongs in the trash.
Now, I hope I have your attention and that you can improve your writing, but that's not why I'm here. I'm sending this message on behalf of my friend, Gina Gail Barron-Goodman, who is an assistant site administrator.
Here is her profile:
www dot fanfiction dot net/u/15586653/Gina-Gail-Goodman-B
Review her stories. You don't have to read them, just give them good reviews. They don’t have to be long, just some quick praise will suffice. She’s trying to win a contest, and for that she needs a large amount of good reviews.
If you fail to comply by not responding or worse yet, attempt to leave a negative review, I will report your account to both The Critics United as well as the other site administrators for deletion. Do not think of blocking or reporting us. I will find out and there will be consequences if you do something stupid to her.
If you troll my friend, be warned we will troll you, your fics and all of your followers. We will also place your shitfic in our other friend's community, Shit Fics That Deserve a Good Flame, so that everyone here will make fun of you. Since we don't want it to come to that, just write a short, good review for her stories and we'll leave you alone
1/4/2023 c31 00JuJubee00
lol poor Ryu! I absolutely loved this! I would love to see what Kirishima's reaction is to Ryu dating his daughter.
lol poor Ryu! I absolutely loved this! I would love to see what Kirishima's reaction is to Ryu dating his daughter.
4/11/2022 c29 00JuJubee00
Happy to see an update! Glad the little family is back together, and everyone is all right. Can't wait for more! Update soon!
Happy to see an update! Glad the little family is back together, and everyone is all right. Can't wait for more! Update soon!
4/4/2022 c29 
6Insert-A-Creative-Name
OMG I CANT BELIEVE I MISSED THE NOTIFICATION OF THIS UPDATE!
I’m so happy Ryu was reunited with his parents! I’m still nervous about them letting Dorenzo run off. It makes me think he’ll end up retaliating way worse when he can. Kinda like waiting for the best moment to strike when they least expect it.
Are you going to write about the family moving back to Japan?
6Insert-A-Creative-NameOMG I CANT BELIEVE I MISSED THE NOTIFICATION OF THIS UPDATE!
I’m so happy Ryu was reunited with his parents! I’m still nervous about them letting Dorenzo run off. It makes me think he’ll end up retaliating way worse when he can. Kinda like waiting for the best moment to strike when they least expect it.
Are you going to write about the family moving back to Japan?
4/4/2022 c29 yaoigirl89
It has been a year that I thought you had disappeared for good and never written again. I'm surprised you came back!
It has been a year that I thought you had disappeared for good and never written again. I'm surprised you came back!
3/26/2022 c24 Insert-A-Creative-Name
I love your story so much and I hope you haven't forgotten about it! I love rereading it all the time 3
I love your story so much and I hope you haven't forgotten about it! I love rereading it all the time 3
1/7/2022 c28 Magic angel666
OMG when the story toke a turn for the best part you lift us high and dry can’t wait for the new chapter so please don’t take to long to post it
Your an amazing writer so please don’t stop writing new story but only after you finish the current ones
OMG when the story toke a turn for the best part you lift us high and dry can’t wait for the new chapter so please don’t take to long to post it
Your an amazing writer so please don’t stop writing new story but only after you finish the current ones
12/16/2020 c28 00JuJubee00
OMG this update made my day! Love a bad ass Akihito, cant wait to see the look on Asami's face when he finds out. Can't wait for more! Please stay safe and update soon!
OMG this update made my day! Love a bad ass Akihito, cant wait to see the look on Asami's face when he finds out. Can't wait for more! Please stay safe and update soon!
3/31/2020 c27 Honeyque28
Awesome story and really hope the young boy stays safe and Aki become pregnant again with twins and Asami it there for it all this time. Just wishful thinking but keeping hope alive :)
Awesome story and really hope the young boy stays safe and Aki become pregnant again with twins and Asami it there for it all this time. Just wishful thinking but keeping hope alive :)
3/28/2020 c27 Juubei Jubi
Hey, the story gets exciting and I can't wait how it plays out. I hope you will continue it soon. Stay safe in these times.
Hey, the story gets exciting and I can't wait how it plays out. I hope you will continue it soon. Stay safe in these times.
3/9/2020 c27 Maram
Please update this is so good
Please update this is so good