for Curse of the Black Dragon4/24/2017 c3 Sigh
Welcome back! I really like your story! :D
Welcome back! I really like your story! :D
3/19/2017 c2 
1dinkycharlie
Can't remember the original one anymore, but I'm still interested in reading more of it!
1dinkycharlieCan't remember the original one anymore, but I'm still interested in reading more of it!
3/14/2017 c2 6TheWonderfulShoe
Oh my! Has this story changed a lot? I had entirely forgotten about it and then I got an alert! I'll be excited if you're writing more! :)
6TheWonderfulShoeOh my! Has this story changed a lot? I had entirely forgotten about it and then I got an alert! I'll be excited if you're writing more! :)
7/25/2016 c3 TheWonderfulShoe
Looks like it's your unwarranted jealousy eating you up, to me! :P Wonder how long it'll take him or Merle to realize...
It's too bad this ended here! Is it done, or were you going to continue it? At any rate, thanks for sharing!
Looks like it's your unwarranted jealousy eating you up, to me! :P Wonder how long it'll take him or Merle to realize...
It's too bad this ended here! Is it done, or were you going to continue it? At any rate, thanks for sharing!
2/20/2015 c3 1dinkycharlie
Nice story and very well written.. It's hard for me to understand why van wouldn't trust Hitomi. I mean this jealousy is obviously causing his illness somehow... I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
1dinkycharlieNice story and very well written.. It's hard for me to understand why van wouldn't trust Hitomi. I mean this jealousy is obviously causing his illness somehow... I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
10/17/2013 c6 3Leila Hime
Loved reading your story! You really fleshed out my old story and made it enjoyable to me again! Keep up the fine writing - I look forward to reading more of your work.
3Leila HimeLoved reading your story! You really fleshed out my old story and made it enjoyable to me again! Keep up the fine writing - I look forward to reading more of your work.
7/3/2013 c5 jossi-31
Interesting, please continue. I worry a little that Hitomi is blaming herself for this, when it's in no way her fault. She has the right to travel and visit friends independently from her husband.
Interesting, please continue. I worry a little that Hitomi is blaming herself for this, when it's in no way her fault. She has the right to travel and visit friends independently from her husband.