for Prey At First Sight6/16/2013 c6 
55Torie Rilistkrytcat
No, Justin, you bastard! How could he?
Great chapter though :)
(I still vote she keeps the baby :D )
55Torie RilistkrytcatNo, Justin, you bastard! How could he?
Great chapter though :)
(I still vote she keeps the baby :D )
6/11/2013 c5 Guest
Kind of want to abort.
I'm so mean
Kind of want to abort.
I'm so mean
6/12/2013 c2 I'll Cover Angel and Collins
Okay, I really like this and this story has an amazing plot, The only thing that bugs me is the way you have them talking you have the spaces like this " Justin, I love you " when it should be "Justin, I love you." you don't need to space the " they can attach to the letter. Sorry, pet peeve of mine, but I do like this story and I feel horrible for Heather. Good job.
Okay, I really like this and this story has an amazing plot, The only thing that bugs me is the way you have them talking you have the spaces like this " Justin, I love you " when it should be "Justin, I love you." you don't need to space the " they can attach to the letter. Sorry, pet peeve of mine, but I do like this story and I feel horrible for Heather. Good job.
6/10/2013 c5 55Torie Rilistkrytcat
Awwwww
Okay, I think Heather should KEEP THE BABY and Alejandro can be a good father to it.
55Torie RilistkrytcatAwwwww
Okay, I think Heather should KEEP THE BABY and Alejandro can be a good father to it.
6/8/2013 c3 Torie Rilistkrytcat
This is creepy but intense, great job! (Ugh, I hate Justin so much...)
This is creepy but intense, great job! (Ugh, I hate Justin so much...)
6/7/2013 c1 55Torie Rilistkrytcat
Awesome! This fic seems really intense and good, I can't wait for more! (Justher sucks, Aleheather forever!)
55Torie RilistkrytcatAwesome! This fic seems really intense and good, I can't wait for more! (Justher sucks, Aleheather forever!)