for Abominations and Vampires6/15/2014 c5 
5Merchosias
OMFG Such a fabulous chapter
I read it at 2 in the morning while my family was asleep in the living room and had to hold my laughs in, it was very difficult
Dude I may have written and typed more than you but your a fantastic writer and better than me already
I would love to continue reading this and I have been waiting for this chapter for quite some time
Trust me I know all about Writer's Block
Keep up the good work and Ill miss you at school next year
P.S Don't forget to message me on facebook sometime or at least Skype me
Your Best Buddy
Blake
ATV145
5MerchosiasOMFG Such a fabulous chapter
I read it at 2 in the morning while my family was asleep in the living room and had to hold my laughs in, it was very difficult
Dude I may have written and typed more than you but your a fantastic writer and better than me already
I would love to continue reading this and I have been waiting for this chapter for quite some time
Trust me I know all about Writer's Block
Keep up the good work and Ill miss you at school next year
P.S Don't forget to message me on facebook sometime or at least Skype me
Your Best Buddy
Blake
ATV145
1/6/2014 c4 TopTop
please keep writing that was awesome story and I think you should continue it
please keep writing that was awesome story and I think you should continue it
10/26/2013 c4 Guest
Very enjoyable, good job not trivializing Tsukune and keeping everyone's power levels in check. Keep it up!
Very enjoyable, good job not trivializing Tsukune and keeping everyone's power levels in check. Keep it up!
10/22/2013 c4 5Merchosias
Hilarious, I absolutely WUV IT!
I still think there could be some lime at least, yes lime would be perfect rught now.
I have the lemon and you can provide the lime so we can have ourselves some Sprite!
I hope you continue this story, I am dying to see some shimuru. Or some Rubume, or maybe some mokano!
See you at school :D
5MerchosiasHilarious, I absolutely WUV IT!
I still think there could be some lime at least, yes lime would be perfect rught now.
I have the lemon and you can provide the lime so we can have ourselves some Sprite!
I hope you continue this story, I am dying to see some shimuru. Or some Rubume, or maybe some mokano!
See you at school :D
10/4/2013 c3 Alan Rickman
did you die mate?
did you die mate?
9/7/2013 c3 imadeadude
please up date soon O.O
please up date soon O.O
8/21/2013 c3 Merchosias
Make Ume try to kiss one of the two girls or try to kiss tsukune like yukari was with tsukune at first then she kind of started liking him but she is still gay but she thought she give it a try
I want to see some parts :D
Your friend at school
ATV145
Make Ume try to kiss one of the two girls or try to kiss tsukune like yukari was with tsukune at first then she kind of started liking him but she is still gay but she thought she give it a try
I want to see some parts :D
Your friend at school
ATV145
8/21/2013 c2 Merchosias
I like the ShimaXKurumu Pairing they fit each other
I love the story and watch your typing for small and minor mistakes and mispellings
Continue on my friend
I like the ShimaXKurumu Pairing they fit each other
I love the story and watch your typing for small and minor mistakes and mispellings
Continue on my friend
8/9/2013 c2 te.nellis
That was another good chapter. I like how you paired the blind man with the overly beautiful girl lolololololol
That was another good chapter. I like how you paired the blind man with the overly beautiful girl lolololololol
8/8/2013 c1 te.nellis
That was a good chapter I like how the story is fluent and the OCs do not replace anyone but full their own supporting role. Those roles could be a little smaller so Tsukune has a bigger role but other than that I have no complaints keep it up!
That was a good chapter I like how the story is fluent and the OCs do not replace anyone but full their own supporting role. Those roles could be a little smaller so Tsukune has a bigger role but other than that I have no complaints keep it up!
7/27/2013 c2 5DoomKnight1of24
That was, surprisingly, actually rather enjoyable. I've briefly read some other OC-stories here on the RV-section, and they tend to cross over in Mary Sue-territory pretty quickly... so I'm happy to see that you managed to avoid that! Seriously, well done.
I think the reason that you managed to pull that off so nicely is, while you did expose these OCs a lot in your story so far, you never -over-exposed them. You let them keep some secrets, like what sort of monster Shima is, and you managed to make them interesting and with distinct personalities. While not going over the top (although you did skirt the line making Takeshi the Jack of All Trades that he is, but that's neither here nor there. Besides, as far as I know, you might have some sort of awesome backstory lying in wait for that somewhere).
That said, I think this story is definitely worth supporting! Looking forward to your next update, 'cause if there is a major problem with this story here, it's that there isn't more of it.
5DoomKnight1of24That was, surprisingly, actually rather enjoyable. I've briefly read some other OC-stories here on the RV-section, and they tend to cross over in Mary Sue-territory pretty quickly... so I'm happy to see that you managed to avoid that! Seriously, well done.
I think the reason that you managed to pull that off so nicely is, while you did expose these OCs a lot in your story so far, you never -over-exposed them. You let them keep some secrets, like what sort of monster Shima is, and you managed to make them interesting and with distinct personalities. While not going over the top (although you did skirt the line making Takeshi the Jack of All Trades that he is, but that's neither here nor there. Besides, as far as I know, you might have some sort of awesome backstory lying in wait for that somewhere).
That said, I think this story is definitely worth supporting! Looking forward to your next update, 'cause if there is a major problem with this story here, it's that there isn't more of it.
7/27/2013 c1 Guest
This story seems pretty good and your oc's seem to be well developed charectors who are not perfect who can do anything likes most, so nice work,
This story seems pretty good and your oc's seem to be well developed charectors who are not perfect who can do anything likes most, so nice work,