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9/5/2017 c17 4lizyeh2000
Love your story now following! . Please update soon!
7/22/2017 c16 Guest
Thay stayed...as friends? -IzunaFoxFlames
7/22/2017 c16 NyanCos
I wonder what would happen if their first kiss was accidental. haha. Since they are both so stubborn, I can't help but feel that something should happen first before they can confess.

This chapter was a good filler to show how much they are struggling about their feelings since both of them seem too comfortable to change the relationship they have now. And as an avid shoujo manga reader, its the part that is most enjoyable and frustrating part of the story. I mean, you can't help but want them to get together already but at the same time, enjoy their hilarious mishaps along the way.

It's also what I like about your story. It's still a shonen-manga genre but you don't forget about building the romance. Also, I commend you for making an OC that is outspoken who isn't annoying. I just really like how you fit her into the story.
12/23/2016 c15 6J.M.Weezy
I absolutely adorned this story, really. It was exactly what I was looking for with a few twists. I loved it. You did such an amazing job!
12/4/2016 c15 1B.Boppolop.p
Do you plan on making a sequel or continuing? I really look forward to more!
11/6/2016 c15 XAliceX
Awesome story so far! Can't wait what happened next of Yurin life
1/16/2016 c11 1Reflection2013
RinxYurin please! Loving this please update soon!
1/9/2016 c11 5Darth Sky Commander
Why can't siblings just get along nicely? lol

Very nice job. Keep it up!
1/9/2016 c11 1Nerdygirl-anime
Omg. I love it. Lucifer is such a bitch. I hope she dies in a hole.
1/2/2016 c10 FlowerOfTheStars
This is so much better! It's... it's... No words can describe how great this chapter is! And it's super long! I love it when you make super long chapters!

I don't even know what to say! This is just too great! More, more, more, more, I want more!
12/29/2015 c6 The Forest
A yen is 1 cent in US dollars
12/28/2015 c10 Nerdygirl-anime
Ugh. Cliffhanger. No. What happens. *panics* ehhhh. *goes to the corner and sulks*
12/28/2015 c10 InLuvWithCandy
Kick ass Yurin!
12/22/2015 c9 FlowerOfTheStars
I love this chapter so much more in this version! It describes more the feelings, it conveyed a lot more feelings.. Well, at least that's what I thought! I don't remember the last version so well, but sure enough this chapter did give me a different feeling... It's just a gut feeling, I'm not sure.

I also love the fact that the chapters are so much longer now! I can enjoy them so much more like this! Last time I was always shouting: "Why?! Already finished?! LONGER!" and I think I still am but for another reason. I enjoy more the chapters and want them to be longer because they are so exciting!

Look forward to the new version of chapter 10! That one will kill me, just like it did last time!
12/11/2015 c9 5Darth Sky Commander
Nice chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one!
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