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12/23/2017 c6 Zela Night
He would be good at infiltration, wouldn't he?
I like Himura having a real demon to play games with.
8/3/2016 c6 AnimeFreak71777
:D
2/26/2016 c6 StoneTheLoner
Shame you never finished this.
2/26/2016 c3 StoneTheLoner
Hiruma seems a bit subdued when you compare him to the Hiruma from Eyeshield 21. Is that a difference in personality that's permanent, or will his personality become a bit more wild and chaotic later on in the story?... And I just read the last half of this chapter lol. There is that crazy personality I was looking for :)
5/23/2015 c6 silverfoxkurama
just want to say this fic is great before i was gonna say make sena the med ninja she could kind of be like tsunade i can totally c her using the juuken strike with the super strength can u imagine the bad assery or let her use her juuken insted of stabbing she can slice any way can't wait for more
5/19/2015 c6 Guest
Why did you stop
12/14/2014 c6 A Deathless Song
This is such an entertaining read. It's well written, intelligently plotted, and the characterization is three dimensional and realistic. Plus, I just love reading about Hiruma as a ninja, because his mind is diabolical and he'd thrive in that environment. I hope you continue this someday. n_n
10/2/2014 c6 12animecat
I absolute love your story. I read it nonstop. It made me laugh all the way through. I hope you eventually update this fanfic. Its worth reading.I'm so happy that I found it. By the way, I love reading Fem! Sena stories so it was a double win for me.
9/14/2014 c6 1OBSERVER01
awesome fic
7/6/2014 c1 Wonderful
Hello, I really enjoyed reading your fic! Everyone was well in character and I especially liked how you mixed up the teams, families and senarios. Keep up the great work! Oh, also, I totally love this fic even more because while hes still a kid, Hiruma acts smart, deducing the teamwork factor of the secret test and not just using Sena as a sacrifice! Love all 6 chapters, and I hope you continue!
10/20/2013 c6 suntan140
are you going to get hiruma dog Cerberus in this story? it doesn't look right hiruma is without his dog
9/1/2013 c5 9Vegetanime
Yay! A new chapter! And pretty long!

You're right, it's pretty strange that a mission goes according to plan, especially the first one! But afterwards you've put the fight gainst the bandits, so I've been able to see their ability which is what I wanted.

Also, who will be able to teach Hiruma how to use the bow? I don't recall anyon from Naruto using one.

Poor Kurenai. I really do hope see doesn't find out who is responsible for those pranks. It wouldn't be pretty for our demon.

I also wanted to ask you, will Orochimaru show interest in Hiruma? You've mentioned they wee both very similar, which I think is true, so I'd like to know if Orochimaru is going to show the same interest for Hiruma he showed for Sasuke in the canon.

Can wait for the next chapter :)
8/16/2013 c4 kapurisudesu
THIS WAS FUCKING AWSOME! I really hope you update soon :)
Can't wait for more, it's really good so far ;D
Wuv you! K-chan xxx :3
8/7/2013 c1 No Account Yet
Don't you think it's kind of unfair if Hiruma has the powers of Naruto? Hiruma is a super genius with IQ level over 9000, he's a realist and opportunist and besides Lina Inverse, is the one anime character that most definitely fits as the "Munchkin" type and the only thing to balance it out is his physique which is below an average human male his age.
7/28/2013 c4 Vegetanime
I really laughed my ass of! Great chapter, it relly made my day ;)

Poor Asuma, they always get him into trouble XD I really hated Hinata's dad till the Neji vs. Naruto fight, so I feel you've characterized him just fine.
So you're telling me Hiruma is alredy friends with Kyuubi and alrady knows his name? And that they play poker? That's just so cool and hilarious! Kurama will be a great aid for future missions, and that will quicken the story even more.
And lastly, the Sunset of Youth.. being used to traumatize Asuma's team... s funny! Kurenai went too far! I'd love to see Hiruma's revenge XD
I'm loooking forward for the C-ranked missions and whatever else you're thinking of :)
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