
1/18/2015 c16
1OrihimeKurosakiInoue
Lol I Was Shocked To See Nnoitra As Her Captor Because I Thought It Was Grimmjow For Some Reason * shrugs * But Amazing Chap :)

Lol I Was Shocked To See Nnoitra As Her Captor Because I Thought It Was Grimmjow For Some Reason * shrugs * But Amazing Chap :)
1/12/2015 c16
5Renji4eva
Berry-tan!
Quite a chilling chapter, this one but it's well done. And smexy Ichigo is smexy as always! That shower scene, though . . . *sigh* XD
Update soon!

Berry-tan!
Quite a chilling chapter, this one but it's well done. And smexy Ichigo is smexy as always! That shower scene, though . . . *sigh* XD
Update soon!
1/9/2015 c15 Firework's Feelings
I just love the interaction between Ichi and Ishida. I almost made a fool of myself at work cuz i was cracking up. Amazing job. And Orihime!? I can not wait till the next chappie.
your follower,, FF
I just love the interaction between Ichi and Ishida. I almost made a fool of myself at work cuz i was cracking up. Amazing job. And Orihime!? I can not wait till the next chappie.
your follower,, FF
12/24/2014 c3 Guest
'So where next' not 'so where's next'
'what just happened' not 'what's just happened'
This sentence does not make sense: 'drunk withing the sounds of their feet'
Remember it's an ellipsis, so three periods, not two
'So where next' not 'so where's next'
'what just happened' not 'what's just happened'
This sentence does not make sense: 'drunk withing the sounds of their feet'
Remember it's an ellipsis, so three periods, not two
12/24/2014 c2 Guest
Did a leprechaun 'throw' up on him, not 'threw'
'Where was orihime' not 'were was orihime'
'focused on the woman in front of him' not 'focused at the woman in front of him'
'that surrounded her' not 'that surround her'
'Desk' not 'desc'
Did a leprechaun 'throw' up on him, not 'threw'
'Where was orihime' not 'were was orihime'
'focused on the woman in front of him' not 'focused at the woman in front of him'
'that surrounded her' not 'that surround her'
'Desk' not 'desc'
12/24/2014 c1 Guest
Business, remember not busyness
Business, remember not busyness
12/20/2014 c15 Manga Ren
Good story, I'm not going to lie I was confused with a lot of. Chapters but now I think I understand what's going on. Can't wait till I learn what happened fully in the past and who her uncle is (I thought it was Aizen at first) well really can't wait tell you update again
Good story, I'm not going to lie I was confused with a lot of. Chapters but now I think I understand what's going on. Can't wait till I learn what happened fully in the past and who her uncle is (I thought it was Aizen at first) well really can't wait tell you update again
12/20/2014 c15
1OrihimeKurosakiInoue
I Have To Say xD The Exchanged Between Ichigo & Ishida Was Hilariously Entertaining Lol , Especially Because Of The Time & Place They Have This " friendly " Banter w/ Each Other . Ahhhhh I Hope Hime Is Alright :/ I Strangely Found It So Adorable ( considering the circumstances ) That Ichigo Picked Up On That Little Hint , I Mean It Was Just Cute How When He Really Thought About It He Realized Something Was Wrong Because He's Very Aware Of Her Love Of Bean Paste & He Know It Would Probably Be The One Thing In The Word She Would Use As A Hint That She Was In Trouble

I Have To Say xD The Exchanged Between Ichigo & Ishida Was Hilariously Entertaining Lol , Especially Because Of The Time & Place They Have This " friendly " Banter w/ Each Other . Ahhhhh I Hope Hime Is Alright :/ I Strangely Found It So Adorable ( considering the circumstances ) That Ichigo Picked Up On That Little Hint , I Mean It Was Just Cute How When He Really Thought About It He Realized Something Was Wrong Because He's Very Aware Of Her Love Of Bean Paste & He Know It Would Probably Be The One Thing In The Word She Would Use As A Hint That She Was In Trouble
12/17/2014 c15 nypsy
ichi/uryuu banter scene was my favorite in a while, I think. awesome!
happy she fought. hope the duo & rest of available friends find her. will there be security camera footage or some random person who got kidnapping on their phone for the nakama to go on? lots of excitement in chap
ichi/uryuu banter scene was my favorite in a while, I think. awesome!
happy she fought. hope the duo & rest of available friends find her. will there be security camera footage or some random person who got kidnapping on their phone for the nakama to go on? lots of excitement in chap