for Frozen Fire1/7/2016 c49 Guest
Hey are you still Writing this?
Hey are you still Writing this?
12/14/2015 c49 
2Toria1181
SANSA AND GENDRY?! Nooooo I don't approve Robb and Daenerys is perfect arya can't just be alone she deserves gendry. Sansa is my queen and all but no her and gendry don't mix. Sansa has been through the worst and she shouldn't marry
2Toria1181SANSA AND GENDRY?! Nooooo I don't approve Robb and Daenerys is perfect arya can't just be alone she deserves gendry. Sansa is my queen and all but no her and gendry don't mix. Sansa has been through the worst and she shouldn't marry
12/10/2015 c8 Guest
Please continue, there is still a whole lot you can do with this story! And what about some of the people you seemed to forget about? What happened to Robb's Great Uncle the Blackfish and Uncle Edmure Tully and Roslin Frey after the failed Red Wedding? Where are Daenerys' handmaidens? What about Cersei's execution? Will Robb and Daenerys name Theon the next Lord of the Iron Islands since Theon never betrayed him like in canon and he and Robb are still best friends? In the later chapters it said Cersei poisoned Joffery and Tommen so we know they are dead, but where is Myrcella? There is still a lot of unanswered questions so please get to that and please continue!
Please continue, there is still a whole lot you can do with this story! And what about some of the people you seemed to forget about? What happened to Robb's Great Uncle the Blackfish and Uncle Edmure Tully and Roslin Frey after the failed Red Wedding? Where are Daenerys' handmaidens? What about Cersei's execution? Will Robb and Daenerys name Theon the next Lord of the Iron Islands since Theon never betrayed him like in canon and he and Robb are still best friends? In the later chapters it said Cersei poisoned Joffery and Tommen so we know they are dead, but where is Myrcella? There is still a lot of unanswered questions so please get to that and please continue!
12/8/2015 c2 Not well written
People don't talk like this, and the Robb and Dany written here bear little resemblance to the characters in Martin's books.
People don't talk like this, and the Robb and Dany written here bear little resemblance to the characters in Martin's books.
11/9/2015 c1 Guest
Please update soon this is amazing
Please update soon this is amazing
10/15/2015 c6 20thepkrmgc
i think you got the timing wrong, tyrion gets arrested months before things get crazy in kings landing
20thepkrmgci think you got the timing wrong, tyrion gets arrested months before things get crazy in kings landing
10/10/2015 c49 iTotallyShipIt
I've read all 49 chapters of this fanfic, and I loved every single word. At first I was a Dany/Jon fan; however, after reading this amazing story, I've become the biggest Robb/Dany fan. This is one of the few fanfics about Dany, and Robb, please continue it!
I've read all 49 chapters of this fanfic, and I loved every single word. At first I was a Dany/Jon fan; however, after reading this amazing story, I've become the biggest Robb/Dany fan. This is one of the few fanfics about Dany, and Robb, please continue it!
9/20/2015 c49 Khailey Egen
One of the best fanfictions ever. I always love Robb/Dany, and this beautiful story made me really happy. You're my hero! Please update soon!
One of the best fanfictions ever. I always love Robb/Dany, and this beautiful story made me really happy. You're my hero! Please update soon!
9/17/2015 c49 Guest
Actually please keep updating, it's been too long
Actually please keep updating, it's been too long
9/7/2015 c18 6Spartan-168-Django
17 and 18 are probably the best chapter combo in this entire story. 17 ended on the perfect cliffhanger, and the whole birthing sequence was well done, and I think it's great that every major character was given something to do. But the best part of these two chapters I think is the symbolism here: we have a "bleeding star" (the red sunrise) and the "smoke", and we have the Ironborn representing the "salt". Thus, Ladies and Gentlemen, it would appear that Iagan Starkaryen is indeed the Prince Who Was Promised! ;-)
6Spartan-168-Django17 and 18 are probably the best chapter combo in this entire story. 17 ended on the perfect cliffhanger, and the whole birthing sequence was well done, and I think it's great that every major character was given something to do. But the best part of these two chapters I think is the symbolism here: we have a "bleeding star" (the red sunrise) and the "smoke", and we have the Ironborn representing the "salt". Thus, Ladies and Gentlemen, it would appear that Iagan Starkaryen is indeed the Prince Who Was Promised! ;-)