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12/26/2015 c1 2k+Hawki
-Nice word-painting at the start, but perhaps a bit too flowery.

-Not much else to say. It’s fine, all in all, though I’m afraid that I’m at a disadvantage in that while I know that this is based on ‘A Town Called Mercy,’ I’ve never actually seen the episode. But decent job.
6/17/2013 c1 5SherlockAvenger
This story was fantastic. I love the detail you poured into it. You took a scene that no one would give a second thought to,and turned it into something more. Even in the shortness of the story,you really captured the entire essence of these characters. The desperation,the hatred,the cyborg who was supposed to have no emotion and yet was seemingly filled to the brim with it. I had never really thought about what the cyborg was doing as something that he 'had to do',that it wasn't just something he was doing for revenge. It definitely adds to the story. Thank you for writing this :) It was really great. Oh,and sorry for geeking out there,I just really like Doctor Who..haha.

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