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7/2/2019 c1 Cassandra30
Heartbreakingly beautiful!
12/30/2017 c1 mannd1068
So good, Thanks for Sharing
5/25/2016 c1 Jennida Jimenez
Your Cho/Cedric stories are awesome you should do some sort of Twilight Harry Potter Crossover with cedric and Cho Great writing.
2/14/2015 c1 ElsaElphieGinny
I really like how you didn't have Cho moping for the rest of her life like most the fanfics write her, keep it up!
5/29/2014 c1 Hey You
Harry Potter and the Order of The Phoenix is the worst book.
1)Cho goes and dates a boy who seen her boy friend murdered months before. Oh and how many fifteen year old boys are mature.
2)Loony Lovegood is worshipped while a girl who has been there since Harry first visited Kings Cross gets bashed then their relationship is bashed just for being a teenage relationship. (Harry/Ginny in HBP). You worship Cho though and think Harry and Ginny are the villains in the book painting everything they do as negative. Guess what WE ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO LIKE THAT TWERP CALLED ZACHARIAS SMITH.
3)You then worship the other twerp Marietta Edgecombe who nearly got half of Hogwarts expelled and possibly thrown into Azkaban oh and it includes her friend. Then Dumbledore had to leave oh and no one is fucking perfect so Dumbledore did think Moody was Moody in the fourth book.

You expect the characters to all be fucking perfect all of you twerps on Fictionalley Park, you paint all the good guys in a bad light (in the books) and omg the poor poor innocent little angelic Slytherins how dare that evillllllllllllle Dumbledore be soooo fucking meeeeeannnnnnn 2 them at the end of the first book. Slytherin's are little angels and we should pity them.

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You are NOT a Harry Potter fan, none of you twerps on Fictionalley Park are.
7/5/2013 c1 forever4
Great piece! I liked that it had everything of heartbreak in it but still ended in hope, and that's really talented writing... because if you were to neglect the pain in grieving, it would cheapen their relationship, but if you were to end the story with Cho fixated on Cedric, it wouldn't honor his memory at all and everything he's given to her. Love it.
6/10/2013 c1 510yellow 14
Sad and insightful. Simply beautiful. Keep writing

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