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2/4 c9 Estrella-Dorada
Vaya, encontré este fic por pura casualidad, hace años que no visitaba este Fandom y llegué aquí solo a través de la lectura de otra historia entre los favoritos de una autora que no tenía nada que ver con Transformers, en realidad ni siquiera estoy segura de cómo terminé aquí. XD

Pero me alegra haberlo hecho porque encontré buenos fics. Debo decir que leí la otra historia que empezó a escribir Ulurnaga y es una lástima que no haya continuado... Creo que nadie sabe qué le pasó, pues no ha dado señales de vida en años y es una pena...

También es una lástima que tu también hayas dejado de lado esta historia... ¿Supongo que está abandonada? Eso es muy triste porque era una historia muy interesante, con mucho potencial. Hay muchas historias buenas por aquí que se han quedado inconclusas. Y pensar que estaba pasando por una racha obsesiva sobre la franquicia de Transformers justo cuando escribiste esto... Pero no lo encontré porque usualmente no leo historias sin terminar, a menos que me atraigan demasiado y es triste que haya llegado tan tarde... :(

Probablemente ni siquiera leas esto... Ni siquiera sé si sigues por aquí, pero si lo haces, espero que algún día retomes y termines esta historia, me encantaría leer todo porque es buena y me gusta bastante.

Optimus Prime es mi favorito, siempre me ha fascinado (estaba medio enamorada de él cuando era niña xD) y tu OC Tory me agrada, me hubiera gustado llegar hasta el final de su viaje y verlos salir airosos de la adversidad, y ver también hasta dónde llegaría lo que se empezaba a vislumbrar entre ellos.

De todos modos, gracias por la historia, eventualmente me daré unas vueltas por aquí, solo por si acaso.

Lo siento, no hablo inglés, así que uso Google Translate para leer, no podría ser Beta aunque quisiera.
5/10/2021 c9 Infinantwhite
I enjoyed this immensely! Please continue this story!
10/8/2020 c9 SarahThePlayfulPanda
As you say, reviews feed the Author's imagination~ However, I doubt this review, as convincing as I could be, will force you to return to this story. But this concept has grasped ahold of my curiosity and holds it tight. Perhaps you may never finish this story... I will continue to wonder how it would've ended. Maybe, in time, create my own rendition? I will miss Tory and Optimus, and their journey of recovery together. Thank you, for the enjoyment you have given~
2/25/2020 c9 Kira
I'm guessing this story is abandoned? Shame, it's really good.
1/5/2018 c9 Guest
Hahaha! Feed me! Sorry it's funny. But the story is great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
12/11/2017 c1 Adri
Please uptade
11/15/2016 c9 75katmar1994
I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
6/22/2016 c1 5Kit-Kat-Sparrow
This story would be good if you did not glorify rape
2/20/2015 c9 wolfscry248
It's an inspiring story. Optimus seems to be pretty in character and I love the poems added. The extra details compared to the other version of this story is great. The sparks commentary was one of my favorite parts and the connection between Tory and Optimus in the dream is a good addition. I like how Optimus feels distress at the thought of her gone, it feels like it shows how his spark is now connected to her.
1/25/2015 c9 1234
Please please pleeeaaase update
I NEED to know what happens next!
12/27/2014 c9 guest
please update! I've already invested so many emotions in this story.
7/23/2014 c8 1AevonNaga
When is chapter 8 coming out? I'm so curious.
9/26/2013 c5 4SweetSpark22
Clearly the restored eyesight is a byproduct of the sparkrape, BUT something similar happened to myself and my Dad.
He wore glasses, but they broke when I was a baby, but he didn't need them anymore, and hasn't worn glasses since. I had to wear glasses in second and third grade, but I lost them and have had perfect vision ever since.
Sorry for rambling, it's fun to do it when you can't see the annoyed expression on the other person's face.
Love your story.
7/27/2013 c9 1Ardianna Keeper
Two things one, why is this in the movie section? It makes no sense. Two this is very good, better then it was before. If you need help, look me up. I'm skills lie in combat scenes.
7/19/2013 c9 AltariaTrickster
Found å mistake in here. It says she could only open the safe deposit box, when she turned 21, but according to you she just turned 18. I read the original story where she was 21 though...

Do you think that you could build up a romance between Optimus and Tory? Or will this story be a "learn to heal your wounds" kind of story? (Tribute)

doesn't matter either way. Love the story so far, but is confused with the dreams. Is there some sort of connection between them?
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